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Great continuation!!! I hope it gets more and more interesting!

This story seems interesting! Update soon!

It is getting really really interesting!! I hope you update everyday...

I'm pretty sure that 17 is considered a legal adult in the Wizarding world. So Snape could be held on a charge of rape, but not statutory rape, even without the time turner use. Interesting develops though with this story. I look forward to reading more.

Ooh gosh!! What a twist!!haha!! Can't wait to see how Hermione gets him freed! Will she have to admit to her own nasty behaviour??

Ohh. That makes more sense now. I love explanation chapters :)

I love that elixir of yours. I wanted to ask about the mechanics, but you've explained them well enough, and I like the fact that she uses it for other things than raping teachers, and a good thing too, because I can't imagine anything worse than driving someone to suicide. They've both been assholes, but Hermione didstart it, and she had no problem doing it to him in public. I think this was your best chapter yet, and as always- can't wait for more.

I just read your entire story. You carry the intensity of the characters and their actions really well.

Chapter 8 made me cry; how on earth can they recover from this??

Please keep writing!

Your chapter was well written! As for your Severus in the story, something is very wrong with him. I didn't see him as someone who has so little respect for woman. This will have to have some negative effect on Hermione (it was practically rape). I wonder if she will threaten to go to McGonagall, as embarrassing as that would be, Hermione would still come out on top and Severus would have a lot to fear. So I wonder what really is going on, does the potion really work or are they both infected with the curse? Either way Severus is going to have to change his attitude and do some damage control. When you think about it he has been best by a 17/ 18 year old. (For the sake of the law, let's say she is 18).

Omg this story is incredible, and your writing beyond amazing! I have to know what happens next! I've read a lot of fanfiction and I know this is something special.