By chapter twenty-five, the sheer number of times you've used the word 'pussy' has kind of become a deterrent. I don't mind the word itself, but using such repetition is discordant with the rest of your writing style. which I really love.
I love your turns of phrase, and especially love the way you've written Snape.
Indulgent. Decadent. Inspiring. Sensual. Expressive. I have to thank Obstacle Obscured for introducing me to you as an author. I've spent the last week or so reading every single one of your stories on my phone, draining the battery a minimum of twice a day. I enjoyed the naughtiness of this story. Great job.
Chapter 29.
Beautiful and very hot. Lovemaking-healing session. I want some too...
I'm very curious about Lucius and his cursed toys... hahahaha
And I'm glad the purple bitch, with psychotic clit is gone for good :-D
Satisfied Fox xx
Chapter 30.
Wonderful ending, perfectly rounded, all information related and I love their dialogue at the end. I wish men in real life were a more like that!
I like how it hints at their loving and 'busy' future, but without all the descriptions of the wedding, and childbearing, and sleepless nights, and growing old together... Honestly thanks for that ;-) As intelligent readers we can imagine everything else.
The story left me feeling very uplifted and happy.
Thank you for taking your first step into fanfiction, it was a very good decision. Your word-wielding skills are impressive, even your humorous bits are clever and mature and always matching the character.
I've read many other fanfics, ranging from silly and childish to extraordinary and truly wonderful. Your stories belong to the latter category. You are among very few authors, I appreciate for more reasons, than the story itself. English is my second language and I learn a lot from you.
I promise I will read your other stores too.
Thank you
Fox xx
DS,
This is quite a shocking turn of events...
Of course I've expected something sinister, but I think you've exceeded my expectations.
This Violetta seems hideous and evil and sick. Poor Severus will have to fuck her to get Hermione back... yuck
Poor Hermione.
Distressed Fox xx
DS,
This chapter (27) apart from a good fuck with an icky witch, made me laugh a lot, especially things like cutty-throaty. I did laugh out loud.
Will there be any more from Lucius (The Sexy Devil)? I really like Lucius, well, maybe not this one, but in general he is yummy, don't you think?
Expectant Fox xx
DS,
This story pulled me in completely in an instant.
Last night I had to have a stern conversation with myself about going sleep at appropriate time (before 2am ) to be in a useful condition today and ready to teach :) It almost worked...
The story is in a great balance between funny, exciting and scary and good dialogues too. Can't wait to read the rest of it. I think I will finish it today.
Fox xx
Chapter 15.
Emotional and dark and very sad.
One thing I teach on every course is: Perfectionism doesn't make you perfect, it makes you miserable. I think Hermione needs to come to my class... So it wasn't no-nonsense Hermione, it was just unhappy, damaged Hermione chasing unrealistic goal, in attempt to be accepted and to deserve love.
Very sad, but Severus is there and hopefully it'll work out.
I'll read on.
Slightly depressed Fox xx
Ohh noo...This broke my heart... I known it was necessary, but I cried (almost, I have to control myself in a class)
Hard work, I'm telling you.
Fox xx
Chapter 17.
That was lovely and heartwarming. Little bit too much, perhaps? I can only imagine it's not completely the end of the curse and problems, I mean, what would you be writing about for further 13 chapters...
Fox xx