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for Mortal Souls

by bloomsburry

person Ajenni
schedule November 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, firstly I am so glad I ran across this story. I love the premise and story so far please do continue!
person Lilalu
schedule November 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. The OCC-ness doesn't disturb me, I think it works well.
Though I noticed a few annoying spelling mistakes
person Sera21
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is alot better and less OOC then I thought it would be.