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by straightlyconfused

schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More more more!
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!! I get easily annoyed when people make draco too much of a good guy. But this is fantastic he can evolve into a better person or stay as is. Hope to read more soon
person Sula
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing. Very interesting strory, i am hooked on.
person Missus_G
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Poor 'Mione! When will she get her wand back? I hope Malfoy reconsiders his method of punishment. His dominant behavior could have a much less damaging outlet if he could cultivate Hermione's curiosity and elemental urges. ;) Thanks for the update!
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i hope you make hermione a sex slave of some sort.....
person cpetnm
schedule November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting start! I look forward to more.
person Missus_G
schedule November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I quite enjoyed the first chapter--can't wait to see what happens next! Honestly, I'm a bit surprised that Hermione didn't put on some jeans and bunk down on the couch with a knife hidden under the pillow, lol.
schedule November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.

Just wondering...is there like a relaxing charm or compulsion charm on the room? Because there is no way in hell that if I were in Hermione's place that I'd slip into a skimpy nightgown and crawl into my kidnapper's bed! Yikes! I feel like she must've been unwittingly lulled into a sense of invulnerability or something. It sounds that way with how you described Hermione thinking that she should be feeling more cautious but simply didn't.

And then the closet full of women's clothing. So curious! What has Draco cooked up here?

Anyway, looking forward to the plans Draco's laid out for himself... and for her. :)