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for Here, There Be Drackens

by DonalGraeme

person bluefly
schedule January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love your story please continue it. If possible, thank you.
person Kay
schedule November 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am loving your story so far. I happened to stumble upon it when I actually opted to look at AFF. I don't usually. Do you post this story anywhere else, especially anywhere that'll send an emailed notice of an update? I wish you would; I'd hate to miss updates on this story simply because I didn't know it had been updated... :)
person rebekahalana
schedule November 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Liked this chapter . Harry had a bit of a freak out , Remus got some common sense about relationships, & Harry is learning to accept that he's a draken . Love that he is contacting the counsel directly ... I think it would be funny if they planned for possibly walking into a trap . After all, the scale is only proof a draken is involed somehow not that the actual author of the letter is a draken .
person BAFan
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1

"Harry took off in pursuit of Sirius
person BAFan
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2

Excellent chhapter! However, I kind of wish you weren't following the details of Dracken behavior and physiology from the original story quite so faithfully. It would be nice if a Submissive's heat cycles were farther apart - say every six months rather than two or less. Better yet, once a year. That would give the mother a much-needed rest before getting pregnant again. Just a suggestion.
person phoenix-rob
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Off to a really great start. Love how you outlined the characteristics of both dominant and submissive drackens. Also enjoyed the romance advice between Remus and Harry.
next chapter please
person djaddict
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good, I am glad you can continue.

Good chapter with lots of background.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm on e fence with this fic, mostly because I stick to slash so prob will stop reading when he picks a female Dom :(
person Outlawgal
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kreacher is so knowledgeable. I can't believe James and Sirius killed the baby. That is just sick and wrong and I agree with Harry no wonder Severus hated his guts so much. I would hate my guts too if my dad did that to another's child.
I can't wait for the Drakens to responded back :)
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
Glad everything is sorted now.