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To opowiadanie jest fantstyczne i ciekawe.Severus Snape mate smoka to intrygujące ,ciekawa jestem co bedzie dalej .Czekam z nadzieja i ciekawością na ciąg dalszy, oby jak najszybciej.Życzę weny i czasu na pisnie.Miłego dnia.

Wao never thought his bro would step in O.o...

I can't really comment on whether you should re-write this story or not since I have no clue on what changes you wanted to make. I will say that I am really enjoying this story as it is at the moment though! There aren't enough bottom Sev stories out there and especially ones where he is possessively desired, is attractive and plays an important role and bonus for mpreg!!

This was great. Thanks.

So glad that you haven't dropped this! I have to say that I am completely surprised by who this rival was! I do wonder how long he knew Sev was his brother's mate if he was posing as Sirius at Order Meetings, although I am a bit confused as to whether it was the real Sirius that was threatening Sev at the very beginning of the story, also wonder if Dagneth's brother was always planning on claiming Sev or if it is only because he is his brother's mate? I am looking forward to reading more! I do wish there was a form of subscribing here like there is on Archive of Our Own, to get email updates.

I truly hope someone comes and stops Danthor, please update chapter 9 soon.

Is this still ongoing or has it been dropped or maybe moved to another site?

With the title it would be obvious that it's a marauder: more than likely Black. However, I don't think Black or Remus would be a 'rival' to Dagneth. Black seems to hate Sev and Remus is spineless & didn't have a problem with leaving Sev behind. So I am baffled at who would be wanting Sev.

I can't wait for the next hopefully longer chapter & see some more loving between Dag and Sev ;)

I have loved this story from the beginning!!! Thank you so much for the update!

Oh please tell me it's not Sirius!? He couldn't possibly be that stupid......could he? Please update chapter 8 soon.