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... I will never be able to look at the Superman symbol peeking through a dress shirt the same way Ever Again.

Wonderful chapter.

Thanks so much for writing.

Love this story! This may be a naive question, but I'm wondering why he hasn't kissed her on the mouth; he's kissed her everywhere else. Surely, they can have that kind of intimacy? Looking forward to the where they go from here.

another amazing chapter! you really have a gift in creative writing. Im enjoying Snapes new found relaxed character, but I hope he can still cause some angst in later chappies perhaps, I do love a caustic Snape ! anyway really love this (again!) and big fat kudos from me xxxxxx

I love your stories! Write the hottest sex ever! Add into it that it is our favorite dark hero and wow! I love how you also do not just write porn you remember the emotional connection too, I think that is one of the reasons I like your writing so much. Now to go put fresh batteries in my vibrator!

Holy smokes. This is blazing hot!!! I'm not usually into spanking but your story is easing me into to it not unlike a certain Dom... Love it! Can't wait for more!

I absolutely love this fic. Please keep updating.

I am so pleased you're writing again.

You have a real insight into D/s relationships and fantasies and the interaction that goes between a Dom and a sub. I find D/s SS/HG a really intriguing dynamic and very believable for the two characters.

The anticipation in both chapters was excellent and I enjoyed reading their thoughts. I am looking forward to their next encounter.

Wonderful beginning! Looking forward to reading future chapters. I always wonder, though, if it's feasible that three students wouldn't recognize such a distinctive voice. Alas, it's fanfiction and we'll let ourselves just assume there is no recognition. :D Woof!

Yeah she was pirate booty! Litrally!! hurhur, so many pirate puns in one paragraph XD It does surprise me though that Sev is being so open to somebody he doesn't know at all. Hermione I get but Sev hasn't been in a relationship for a long time from what you say and yet he's okay with writing down his inner most desires like that? Isn't he scared that other person could use it against him? I mean just from a psychological perspective he is not really one to trust quickly and usually excepts a more pessimistic view of the world and the people in it...

My god.
I wanna meet him too....

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