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by OracleObscured

person Trelweny
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw man... I hate reading Crookshank's death. Yet I'm so glad he's paid such an integral part in the story. I don't like reading Hermione stories where he's not even a footnote. Heck... I get upset that he's barely mentioned after Book 3 in canon. It's like forgetting a character.

Anyway, it seems they both got a lot closer in expressing their own thoughts and feelings about their closeness as well as accepting the other's. Sure they've not full out "I love you/I want to be with you forever" literally, but I feel they basically Have shown it. Some never get that much, and honestly I'm of the opinion their displays are worth ever-so-much more than those overused phrases. The words might be nice to hear, but being said doesn't make them true and it's often not an Intentional lie. Their way is much more truthful.

Thanks so much for writing.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love this.
Now the school will know!

Severus1snape
person lunarose
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
They're budding relationship and denial/lack of understanding of how deeply they care for each other is truly lovely.
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm sobbing!! What a horrible way to torture yourself every year.. And then poor crookshanks too!!

I wonder what more Severus can give her??

Looking forward to the next installment indeed :)2
person Strotz
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That one should be included warnings! I cried like a baby. You're an amazing writer :)
person LRB
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
soooo good!! i dont know if iv just read too much angsty snape/hermione but im waiting for the other shoe to drop with this-does that sound crazy?? Thankyou for being so regular in your updates i dont know if i could get through Thursday classes without knowing iv got this to read over a wine! great writing, lovely pace and detailing. Its very interesting because I feel this story could go down many directions, such is the quality of your writing. I know people have guessed at the route this story is taking and im purposely keeping away-i love a good spoiler!- but i enjoy your story so much that im being good and enjoying it chapter by chapter for what it is. Have a wonderful christmas and know your bringing such happiness to your readers. LRB xxxx
person chels
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not crooks! Oh that is right in the feelings. So wonderfully sweet.
person Amanda b
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the way the story is going! Thursday's are becoming my favorite day with a new chapter uploaded. I really like how you are delving into what makes both of them tick not just a Dom/sub relationship.
person DesertSea
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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schedule December 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Where can I sign up for a weekend like that?? ;) as always phenomenal story telling skills and beautiful use of language.

They are both already so attached to each other, I wonder if the realisation of their emotional connection will freak either of them out...