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for The Path Less Traveled

by bezo93

schedule January 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg!! Love this! Please PLEASE update soon! I laughed the whole way through it.

person cryort
schedule April 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story. Please write more soon. 

schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Was reading this on myipad, but not logged in = no comments allowed, and I forgot my password ;P

 

I think this is one of my fave creature stories. I love the verbal sparring and interactions. I hope you have the opportunity to finish it. 

schedule March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story. Interesting and complex plot, same thing for the characters, good writing... I certainly hope that you will update one day and finish this quality contribution to the HPfandom ! ;)

schedule February 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I actually had to create an account just so I could let you know how much I am enjoying this story. I do hope you are only taking a prolonged break and you still intend to update with new chapters soon. I need to know what Happens when Harry and Shax finally have a proper meeting!! I think your OG characters are fascinating, just as much so as JKs, and I'm especially intrigued by Gryffindor house being a safe haven for all creatures. I'm sure that will make for hilariously amazing plot twists once Harry gets back to Hogwarts and I hope you'll update when ready so I can read all about it. All in all this is one of my favourite stories I've read on this site so far :)

schedule February 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is one of my favorite stories. I hope that you are just taking a break and will come back to it soon!

person NickyNakole
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I need more! I love this story so much and hope to see a new chapter sokn. I really wish Shax would just man up already, le sigh.

person Anonymous
schedule December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

please continue

schedule June 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the last chapter of the story and I already can't wait for the next chapter. I like the plot so far, it is neither too slow nor too fast-paced. I like the way you portrait Harry. While you stick 'close' to the original you tweak him just a bit to suit your story better. I love the way he keeps everyone around him on his toes and the story interesting with his actions. Your original characters are quite interesting as well and I can't wait to see what they have in store and what future actions they will take during your story. Besides some small grammar mistakes, like missing words, I really enjoy reading your story. And don't let the part about the grammer irritate you because I know myself that when I write I sometimes forget a few words or put them in the wrong order, but overall it does not negatively affect your story. So I hope to see more of your story soon and keep up the writing, but please don't let other people rush you to complete more chapters. We don't want the story to suffer because you feel pressured to upload more chapters. Greetings Bladewater
person DarkenedRose1988
schedule May 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Kinda depressed at the cliffy... It is a really good fic and I could hardly stop reading! Can't wait for you to update soon!