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October 9, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Love this story every single time I read it!!!!
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September 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM
What a most beautiful love story....
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July 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Both a very hot and very sweet story. Thank you!!!!
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April 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I SO enjoyed this! Thank you.
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April 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just wanted to say thank you for this story. I really enjoyed it and, in my opinion, it was a brilliant first attempt at fanfiction :-) Very sexy without being too graphic (which I wouldn't mind:), sweet without too fluffy, all the facts tied together nicely and Them in character enough for my liking. I also like, that there is no definite end to their story together...I believe they deserve to continue.
Thank you
Fox
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a tremendous story, especially for a first fanfic! I really enjoyed it. The characters were in character with just enough plot to hang the lemons on! I hope that you will be writing more! Well done!
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November 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That was fabulous. I can't believe this is your first fanfic. Not only was this incredibly hot, it was wonderfully written. The flow was excellent, the imagery was vivid, and the word choice satisfied the vocabulary hound in me. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
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October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story!
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October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable! I caught a couple of errors:
"The latest bout of convulsions seemed even worse that the others. . . ." Than, not that.
" . . . She shifted her weight onto just one hand, then grabbed the opposite edge of the jumper and helped him tugged it up over her head. . . ." Tug, not tugged.
Aside from those small typos, this is very well-written. I loved how Hermione was able to coax Snape into being more human. I think they'll have a hard time going back to the way things were, though. :-)
~Debbie
"The latest bout of convulsions seemed even worse that the others. . . ." Than, not that.
" . . . She shifted her weight onto just one hand, then grabbed the opposite edge of the jumper and helped him tugged it up over her head. . . ." Tug, not tugged.
Aside from those small typos, this is very well-written. I loved how Hermione was able to coax Snape into being more human. I think they'll have a hard time going back to the way things were, though. :-)
~Debbie
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October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well written story! I really enjoyed this! please keep writing!