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for Give Him the World

by bezo93

person Autumngold
schedule November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Harry's memories make me sad, but thank you for making his future so bright. At least now, hopefully, he will be able to be himself. Fabulous update! Please update again when you can!
schedule November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAA!!!!! you updated!!!! I'm so happy!!! Your story is amazing! i can't wait for more!
person nari-chan
schedule October 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful start ,
i was sad to see that it stopped and i dint want it to end.
please update again soon i cant wait to read more :)
person starr
schedule October 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow I like finally a new new twist to the story...looking good can't wait for more !!!!!
schedule October 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great opening chapter! definitely attention grabbing. look forward to reading more and I'm glad that it ran a bit away from you so that can happen. love this pairing.
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!! Please keep up the good work!(I kinda made an account just so I could review your story...he)
person autumngold
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting start to your story! I am glad that Harry has finally found someone who will care for and about him. After everything the Light, Dark and Dursleys put him through, he deserves the best! Excellent beginning to your story! Can't wait for more!
person CDGaymer
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, curious where this story will go.
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
'bout time someone thought to pamper har. He deserves that and more with the crap he's been through.
It won't be easy though. As damaged as he is and as self reliant as he has been forced to be, it'll take him some time to understand that he deserves to be cared for, maybe even needs it and that it brings his partner pleasure to do so.
Vlad's going to have an up hill struggle to get him to accept it. Harry won't understand why he's doing it and will likely think he doesn't deserve it.
Good luck old son, you'll need it.