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May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating story, it’ll be interesting to see interactions at Hogwarts
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March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool strory, this one is...
Kinda badass, even, I'd say.
Kinda "oh my god I soooo want more" and "author I love you", really.
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December 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! I hate that you've left it on such a cliffhanger and hope to see an update soon!
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December 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2
Poor Harry. He has quite the task before him: trying to save the world from itself. Not an enviable assignment!
Since you said you don't mind corrections *g*, this is one I've noticed recurring:
"Death seemed to clasp it's hands together. . . ."
Should be "its hands." No apostrophe is needed. The ONLY meaning for "it's" is a contraction of "it is" or "it has." Ex: It's time to go. It's been fun.
Off now to read the next chapter!
Poor Harry. He has quite the task before him: trying to save the world from itself. Not an enviable assignment!
Since you said you don't mind corrections *g*, this is one I've noticed recurring:
"Death seemed to clasp it's hands together. . . ."
Should be "its hands." No apostrophe is needed. The ONLY meaning for "it's" is a contraction of "it is" or "it has." Ex: It's time to go. It's been fun.
Off now to read the next chapter!
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
Sorry to hear about all your troubles. I hope life is going more smoothly for you now.
Excellent chapter. I'm so glad Hardwin/Harry is having a happy childhood, even if Death is disdainful of it. Death needs to remove that stick from his ass, lol. This story is very interesting and I'm enjoying it immensely.
One correction, though I couldn't find it here when I looked for it: you consistently use "preform" when it should be "perform."
Sorry to hear about all your troubles. I hope life is going more smoothly for you now.
Excellent chapter. I'm so glad Hardwin/Harry is having a happy childhood, even if Death is disdainful of it. Death needs to remove that stick from his ass, lol. This story is very interesting and I'm enjoying it immensely.
One correction, though I couldn't find it here when I looked for it: you consistently use "preform" when it should be "perform."
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4
OMG, poor Harry. Bad enough that he has to go through so much agony once, much less twice. He'll really be able to empathize with Remus now. Can't wait for the next update!
~Debbie
OMG, poor Harry. Bad enough that he has to go through so much agony once, much less twice. He'll really be able to empathize with Remus now. Can't wait for the next update!
~Debbie
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very understandable the chapter you wrote, he has to do thing to bring the balance back .....Thanks for the update!!!!!! BTW is Harry losing his memory or he has 2 now !!!!
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November 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Things sure took a turn! Poor Harry, he was just starting to have some fun LOL! Wonder what Death is going to make him do now :0
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November 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG your back again !!!!!! so Harry has to go and start fixing things when he is just 7 years old !!!!!!!!!! shit to fast Tom !!!!! your kidding !!!!!! well can't wait for more so see you soon !!!!! :):):):)