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for Turn around Bright Eyes

by SlytherinPenguin

person Mai
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, the cursive hurts my eyes. I can't read this story.
schedule October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. It's got a good basis. I read on my own reviews that you wanted me to Email you but I don't have your Email address, you can try sending one to me by using this name just let me know when you do so i cn make sure that my email is working.

Moonddancer29@Yahoo.com
person nari-chan
schedule October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
things are getting interesting and i cant wait to see how this pans out! please don't leave us hanging too long :)
update again soon :)
person nari-chan
schedule October 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
add more soon :)
person Talva
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Right now I would only suggest that you change the font style. Although it looks pretty it makes it much harder to read in this format.
person nari-chan
schedule October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read what is coming :) please update again when you can.:)
person FasIkbenVanEyck
schedule October 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really catching start. This looks so promising and I need to know what's next, please... more!!!
person Luna8
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like to see those three (Dumbledore, McGonagall and, of course, Hermione) being so respecful towards Snape. Keep going. It's lovely.
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing! I'm enjoying the story so far :) looking forward to the next installment!
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well there better be more soon! i am positively on the edge of my seat, update soon please!