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very good chapter, i hope harry will be ok.
i wont mind if its dray/nev/harry or nev/harry, eaither would work. Or u could start it as Nev/Harry and bring Dray into it later

It's sick if ron gets to stay in school. He should go to prison

I love this story. It is very unique and keeps my interest. I love the quiet and shy Harry that you portray. I would like to see a Neville/Draco/Harry pairing. I think that it has been nicely set up. I also am hoping that Ron and the rest of the Gryffindors will be properly punished now that responsible adults are aware of the situation. Thank you for another great chapter.

hi
brilliant story so far
please keep updating
just a little note on this chapter when they are all sitting in the compartment you have put talking about their summers. but they had just come back from their Christmas holidays. just thought you would like to know and also in chapter two when Neville is asking harry "do you only draw animals or other things too?" and harry replies "I draw other things too" at the start of the class you started out calling the professor, professor sprout but after Harry's line about what he draws you changed it to Madame pomphrey, and then went back to calling her professor sprout. again thought you should know besides that
absolutely love this so far
please update soon cullengal101

Poor Neville, of course he hadn't noticed Harry in that light before, what with being with Dean and all, then with having caught him cheating on him, and him being in pain of course he hadn't notice that he had been more then interested in Harry until now, lol(so cute) please update chapter 5 soon.

lols. Neville is so 'gone'. Even with whatever issues Harry has, i think he is still a far better match for Nev than Dean was. I honestly can't see Harry ever condoning bullying... or cheating behavior.
I wonder how long it will be before Nev realizes he's head over heels again?

I really am enjoying this

Sev

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I really like this story. It's an intriguing AU. I hope you keep it up. The interaction between Draco and Neville is fun

as to the question someone else asked about harry being a wimp and scared is going back to his upbringing. he was raised by his mother who protected him from everyone and everything he never had to learn to stand up for himself.this harry was thrown into the big bad world after a whole life of being protected 24/7 by his mother and here he has no protector. this harry never had to turn to get bad grades no matter how smart you are to prevent beating. this harry never had to turn how to out smart dudley and his gang in games of harry hunting. cannon harry learned at a very early age no one is going to be there to protect you all the time but yourself.