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for What If

by BlackDawnRose

person Mia
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
very good
person Mia
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that Harry get's better.
person Jan
schedule March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what's going on with Harry, please update chapter 8 soon.
person phoenix-rob
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, just stumbled on to this story and really enjoying some of the characters being developed and portrayed differently than usual. What is 'wrong' with Harry, he needs to open up to Neville and Draco soon so that Neville can express his love more effectively. The Gryffindors need to be reigned in further and their punishment more public. Next chapter quickly please.
person Jan
schedule December 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, please update chapter 7 soon.
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes you're mean!
person Chianti-Piper
schedule November 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't review often, but I love your story! There really does need to be more Harry/Neville stories out there! I also believe it here should be more slash stories with several others like Blaise, OMC's, - I read a really good one with Justin Finch-Fletchly, but it was taken down and incomplete. Same author did another one that was awesome with Marcus Flint. Just want you to know that this is an AWESOME story! Can't wait for next update!
person CDGaymer
schedule November 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, so cant wait to see why harry rejected nev, and hopefully the can be together eventually.
person Jan
schedule November 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Neville's parents are so cool. Can't wait for chapter 6 😃
person SlythindorMalfoy
schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes three way!!!!!!! Plzzzz!!!!!!!!!!