Interesting premise and very well written, I'm looking forward to how it will develop, and especially Astoria's part in this. Keep up the good work!
Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have all the parts we need to see. It can be worded however you like, as long as you include the name of the specific fandom (and not just the characters) and clearly say that you make no money/profit.
You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough. It's also not enough to say that this is just for fun or entertainment. You have to clearly say that you make no money/profit.
What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.
Here's a link to the Terms of Service:
http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php
This link is to the FAQ about disclaimers, with some examples:
http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560
We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:
http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php
You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.
Thank you,
Dafdes, AFF Archive Moderator