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April 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue? I'm going to save the page and check occasionally to see if you update i hope you do
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January 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Hi silmelinda, I couldn't help but notice you seem to have taken down your LotR stories. I hope everything is ok. I really enjoyed your stories, so I'll miss them! eternalorigin@gmail.com
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September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You aren't leaving this lovely story I hope. Love the pairing and especially can't wait for you to get to the part of Severus being pregnant. What fun that will be!! I'll be waiting anxiously.
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July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This hasn't been updated in quite a while :( Has this by chance been dropped?
I really hope not!
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December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story so far. Hoping it's going to continue according to the preview paragraph. You will be finishing this story won't you please as it is way to good to leave it like that.
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December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I like watching the relationship between Harry and Snape change. I really hope you keep writing it. Thank you for sharing your stories with the rest of us.
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
"The young wizard almost grinned at getting a doze of an equal treatment, when a bulky oath gave him a hefty shove. . . ."
Did you mean "oaf"? An oath is either a vow or a cuss word. Harry could have muttered an oath when the oaf pushed him.
"The pair of girls, one beseeched by the bright purple hair. . . ."
Uh, not sure what you mean here, but I'm pretty sure it isn't "beseeched," which means implored or begged.
"The door to the Potion Master's shop was presentably neat and laconic. . . ."
Unless the door can talk, it can't be laconic, which means to say something using few words.
"Well aware of the ill-wishers who had no clams about destroying all he valued. . . ."
I believe you meant "qualms," not clams.
I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll continue reading this. There are just too many mistakes, which are driving me crazy. It's too bad, because it seems like an interesting story. I strongly suggest you look for a beta reader.
"The young wizard almost grinned at getting a doze of an equal treatment, when a bulky oath gave him a hefty shove. . . ."
Did you mean "oaf"? An oath is either a vow or a cuss word. Harry could have muttered an oath when the oaf pushed him.
"The pair of girls, one beseeched by the bright purple hair. . . ."
Uh, not sure what you mean here, but I'm pretty sure it isn't "beseeched," which means implored or begged.
"The door to the Potion Master's shop was presentably neat and laconic. . . ."
Unless the door can talk, it can't be laconic, which means to say something using few words.
"Well aware of the ill-wishers who had no clams about destroying all he valued. . . ."
I believe you meant "qualms," not clams.
I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll continue reading this. There are just too many mistakes, which are driving me crazy. It's too bad, because it seems like an interesting story. I strongly suggest you look for a beta reader.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Too good not to finish!! I'll forever wonder what could have been if you don't complete it. I love that couple and you've made me wonder what would/could happen next..
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November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 5 soon.
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November 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. I'm so happy Sev is going to be the pregnant one in this story. I love bottom!Sev & mpreg :)