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person sara101
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dammit!!! *pouts* just when it was about to get good. Damn you and your cliff hangers and shit! Ugh! I'm going to bed lol anyways I love it and cannot wait to see what happens next, so please hurry the hell up with the next chapter...please, pretty, pretty pleeeeaaaassseee lol thank you for another great read. ^.^
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it, malfoy and seamus were together before? Or.

Well I don't get it

So they have to snog in front of everyone to be free??

It was so funny.

Sev.
person YouAreACruelHumanBeing
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! This was the longest week of my life. I checked this for updates so often, that it felt like a month since the first chapter. In fact, it felt so long I was honestly becoming afraid this story would be abandoned! Now that my fears have been vanquished: GREAT chapter! I can't wait to find out what the fuck is going on, and it was so cruel of you not to put in even one itty bitty teensy weensy kiss. ;P

At first, because of Malfoy's angry/possessive reaction and growling, I thought this might end up being a creature fic. Can't remember if I speculated that already in my review of the 1st chapter, I can't even remember what name I posted under - all I remember is begging for another chapter and excitedly rambling (much like I am now). So if I'm reiterating, I apologize.

Now, it's clearly obvious that Seamus, Blaise, and Pansy are in on what ever is happening - I just can't figure out why Malfoy is so angry and why he's going to such lengths to keep the 'secret' from Harry. I can't tell if he's embarrassed/angry or trying to protect Harry. I was fairly certain they would have to willingly kiss again (or more) to get the handcuffs off, but now with Malfoy running around grabbing 2 of various alcoholic beverages, I'm beginning to wonder if they just have to drink a lot and get fucked up. Or maybe Malfoy thinks they need to be drunk to kiss (or more) outside of the cupboard? Mmm.. too many questions/speculations and not NEARLY enough answers..

Moral of my review: The suspends is killing me, it may even LITERALLY be affecting myself. I give you a standing ovation because you successfully have me hooked after 2 chapters, well.. really one.. but you know what I mean. Please don't make me wait a-whole-nother week!! Please? I'll do anything.. just one more chapter.. for your biggest fan? lol

No, seriously, no pressure. I don't mind waiting a week, I understand you have a life... but if by chance you DO finish it early, you will not find me complaining.. at all. Even if you told me flat out, right now, that it would be a week - I'd still check every 2 hours.
Till next review,
Foxy<3

P.S. Seamus teasing Draco about Harry's shirt now has me randomly wondering if Draco knew he was in there with Harry. Was it meant to be a 'cruel' prank to force Harry to acknowledge his sexual orientation and Draco lost control? Mm, I can't see Seamus going for that, but it would explain Draco trying to keep them from saying shit to Harry if he changed his mind.... I NEED TO KNOW THESE THINGS!!! lol
person nari-chan
schedule September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please please add more soon i cant wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh god oh god oh my god Lanie!!!

That was... I felt like I was Harry all the time during that...

I want more... NOW!!!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, and Lanie.
This line had better be in chapter 2: Potter, you owe me a new shirt - but I'm agreeable to... other kinds of payments if you cannot affort it, if was quite expensive after all.
person Jan
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So far it's started out very yummy, can't wait to see what chapter 2 is going to bring ^_^
person SoSexy!!
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it's so sexy and the plot so far seems really great! please please please update ASAP, I can't wait to see what happens. <3
person sara101
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No! Awww just when it was getting good. Why do you always do this to us, cliff hangers are not good for our health!! Lol I love this and I cannot wait for the next chapter! ^.^
person moodysavage
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I was excited just by the summary you posted and I was not disappointed when I read the chapter! I loved it! Harry always stands out and sometimes he just can't help but find himself embarrassed by situations. I loved how he was the only one to come out of the closet not all mussed up when he pushed Lavender away and I LOVE how he got carried away with Draco. I do believe that Draco knew it was him :)