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January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This made me feel sick to my stomach with angst! It was brilliant! I actually felt sick at his treatment of Hermione, which is definitely a sign of a great writer. A brilliant story that proves to stimulate strong reactions from the reader - my favourite kind of stories.
I checked this out after you reviewed one of my stories "Malevolence" a couple of times. I've noticed your reviews on other stories over the year (Mainly Lady Jane, who we seem to share a liking for) and was so flattered to see that you read and reviewed one of my stories. I would absolutely love love love if you were to read my other two stories and review them, telling me what you think! Your opinion is greatly valued in my books, and would love to have it especially in relation to my Hate and Love story. But I think you might be a fan of 'You are Home'.
Hope to read your reviews soon!
Ariel Kidd xx
I checked this out after you reviewed one of my stories "Malevolence" a couple of times. I've noticed your reviews on other stories over the year (Mainly Lady Jane, who we seem to share a liking for) and was so flattered to see that you read and reviewed one of my stories. I would absolutely love love love if you were to read my other two stories and review them, telling me what you think! Your opinion is greatly valued in my books, and would love to have it especially in relation to my Hate and Love story. But I think you might be a fan of 'You are Home'.
Hope to read your reviews soon!
Ariel Kidd xx
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September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Started great, ended terribly :(
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September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like your twisted plot! And I am very flattered that I inspired you! I love how sadistic draco is and the whole doing hermione whth the blood of her lover is on him...totally something I would write and will probs write in the future! i love the dialogue but would love to see some more of his internal thoughts. is it weird he kind of reminds me of the riddler?
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Draco's disgusting, heh... Wonder what's going to become of them in the end...
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August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sher, very nice first chapter! The setting was so vivid as was the description of the characters. I had the impression that the story took place in the distant past, with the metal the Warriors wore and the girls bathing in the stream. I look forward to more of your story!