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August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! =)
In your prologue, I think you meant to use the word "conscience" (an inner feeling or voice viewed as acting as a guide to the rightness or wrongness of one's behavior.) rather than "concussion" (A brain injury caused by a blow to the head or a violent shaking of the head and body.)
In your prologue, I think you meant to use the word "conscience" (an inner feeling or voice viewed as acting as a guide to the rightness or wrongness of one's behavior.) rather than "concussion" (A brain injury caused by a blow to the head or a violent shaking of the head and body.)