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Ew, Draco kissed him after Harry had some random dogs cum in his mouth? Eeeew. Thats not hot. Up till now you had me going for it but I guess I do have a line where I won't go any further. Huh, always thought it would be scat play but here we are at actual doggy bj cum sharing. The world is a strange place. I do agree with you though on vanilla "love" fics not getting you off. You should do a search on this site for " Harrys birthday orgy". That one will get you there.

Ah, before I forget I also wanted to comment on the fact that you have decided to dress Harry up like some sort of Punk rocker(?) . How in the name of Merlins bunny slippers would Draco even have an idea of what a punk looks like? I have never heard it mention that he has been in muggle London and wizards certainly don't dress like that so where did he get the clothes from? And really...punk? all those spikes and boring black? and skanky shirts? Why you no like steam punk :'(? I would have so liked to see harry in a tailored waistcoat, tiny tweed shorts and a vest with a fob watch. It would have fit with the wizarding world too...but meh, thats just me. I have a love affair with vests and fob watches. And shorts.In tweed or otherwise.

If you were going to go the skanky route you should have gone with skin tight leather shorts with a conveniently placed zipper for easy access. Mmmmm. Mmmmmmmmmm.

I'm not reading 5his fiction, but I was in the middle of "Doing Wrong". Apparently you moved it to Amazon, but I can't find it there. I don't know where it would be there. Do I have to pay for it now? I was on chapter 10. Can you please put more I information on your profile so I can actually find it please. Im a bit miffed that it's gone.

Is there anyway you can post from chapter 10 to the last chapter of "Doing Wrong" please? I don't want to pay for a book I was reading for free. I would have finished it last night, but you took it down. I checked back today and read your note. Please do this for me. Also, I want to read it as a HP story.

I wish he had just shut Neville completely down.

Hermione just needs to stfu.

Oh my god, poor Neville! Poor fucked up Neville. I hope he and Blaise can get together and we get some sexy fun there, and that Draco doesn't get all mad and shit if he finds out about Neville raping Harry. I can't believe his cousin never even used lube. Fucker.

Side note, if you're looking for hard M/M ebooks, I have a few published on amazon. They get shitty reviews cuz everyone's always looking for lovey dovey crap.

Very, very nice!

Seriously, no one else has reviewed? You people suck, I know you're reading this too. And this story is so fun. I hope Blaise can get Neville without him being some unsexy vegetable.

Uh oh! And Blaise and Neville were just starting to get along too. I just hope Remus doesn't kill them.