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for The Masks of Real Heroes

by Aelys_Althea

person Jan
schedule December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, your welcome😁 though I do hope you know that my words were for Draco and not you? It says a lot about a writer when the reader feels they can communicate with the characters of the story, don't you think?😋
No Harry/Draco in this chapter but there was a lovely first meeting between godfather and godson😉 please update chapter 24 soon.
person Jan
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco, 😔 you F'ed up sweetie, big time! Please update chapter 23 soon, can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Harry/Draco, as well as the meeting with Remus and Sirius.
person Sapphire
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What am I reading?
Please tell me why or how Harry managed to do a complete 180 in terms of personality and mannerisms.
I thought I was reading about Harry being used and abused (which I liked), but now he is suddenly all confident and talking to people and being...normal...and confident.
Did Stephen die? Why was he obsessed with Harry in particular?
person eh
schedule November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping that you will bring Lucius back--that they will find him tortured though alive, especially since there is no body. I hate that he got killed off.
person starr
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Had read some before but I stop, don't know why ????!!!! But now I just finished all of it and man was I floored of all that I missed...Poor Draco hope Harry can get all his things together to be their for Draco...also can he help Narrissa get back to herself, he does have this thing to help people and he should be able to help her !!!!??????? please !!!!!!!!!!! see you soon with another update :):):)
person Silver
schedule November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy! Was that Remus at the end?! I can't wait to see if it is! And poor Draco! After I heard he lost his father I was heartbroken, but now reading about his mother, I'm glad she didn't die but ouch my heart. I'm really proud on how Harry is keeping it together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story is really good you should finish it
person Jan
schedule November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I meant the glitch between Harry's Slytherins and Gryffindor friends at the beginning of their return. Please update chapter 19 soon.
person Sera21
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have really enjoyed your story up till now but I have to call bs on that day in Paris. I don't belive you have actually ever been to paris or you would know that one does not simply visit the Eiffel tower, Louvre, the Orsay, the gardens and Notre Dam IN LESS THEN A DAY. The Louvre is HUGE. It would litrally take a week to walk through the whole thing and while I expect they may have skipped some things there is no way you are spending less then half a day in there. And when you are done you are so OVER art you do not want to visit ANOTHER museum straight after. Its quite overwhelming in its volume. AS it happens I visited the museum d'orsay with my flatmates 2 weeks ago and I belive we spent 4 hours or so in there even though we skipped a whole level as well as the photographs. There is just no way. And Notredam had pamphlets in like 12 different languages at the door. And I'm pretty sure not everywhere in Paris is beautiful, there are alot of really dirty poorer areas epecially coming into the city. But I guess that a point of opinion. Sorry. It was just a bit unrealistic ^^
person Sera21
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wait, hold the boat, did they go to see the Eiffel tower TWICE in this chapter? At the beginning of the day Draco is looking up in wonderment and they are talking about the Eiffel tower and then like a page later Harry is saying they still need to visit the Eiffel tower O_o