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for Before You

by VSBree

person sakura blossoms
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
how could u leave it there!
i love this story
pls update
person magentah
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Eek! Nervous about how their conversation will go, but hopefully will help them resolve things. Loving this story! Thanks for sharing :)
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!! Draco and Harry are too cute :D
person moodysavage
schedule August 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That scene was really really sexy and I loved it! So funny that they got interrupted and I admit... I think it's funny that Draco keeps calling Dakin a troll. I don't think it's crazy that Harry finally said yes to sleeping with Draco. He didn't want to before because he didn't realize he loved Draco... then he didn't think Draco was serious about him... then it was too new and he had to accept that it was true. Now that all that has happened... once he accepts Draco I don't think he will see a reason to not sleep with him. Now he'll just worry whether it will last. Poor Draco. Why don't they just use the floo network to live where they want and take turns going to each others house?
person starr
schedule August 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
the sex scene was HOT !!!! and the part when Dakin came to Harry's house and Draco called him a mountain troll and baffin I was on the floor laughing so much !!! man o man please don't let Draco's mom die now that he finally found the book !!!!! See you soon and thanks for the update !!!! :):):)
person djaddict
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That rhythmic thudding? That is me banging my head on the desk. Sigh.
person starr
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG you started it and then stopped !!!!!! WHY ????? good god hope you'll update soon will go nuts waiting !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!! I'll be waiting :):):):)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I absolutely love it!! Your characters come off as so real and genuine. Jealous Draco is so adorably wicked. That last chapter really got me though...poor Harry!! I really thought by the title they were going to kiss. Hope you can update soon!!
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Um..what?! Did you seriously just update again? I love you and I love this story...and that was quite possibly the cutest thing I have ever read. They're finally together!! Thanks so much for the quick update. I hope you can update again soon!
person jabsher
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
If you keep writing this story and continue with the quick updates you can have as many treats as you like :D