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December 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
A very nice Start, unfortinutly you seem to have left the Story
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September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start
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July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch.1
A great beginning, unlike any HP fic I've read before. Can't wait to see what comes next! That was a good point you made about Tom knowing about Muggle weapons and therefore protecting himself against them.
"' . . . Some people, Salazar Slytherin included, believed that if the muggle born witches and wizards gained political power, and became our equals in every sense, that they would start to erase our culture and way of life, in favour of our own.. . .'"
I think you meant "in favour of THEIR own"?
" . . . A little bit of honey, just like he always made for himself at Private drive. . . ."
Should be Privet Drive.
A great beginning, unlike any HP fic I've read before. Can't wait to see what comes next! That was a good point you made about Tom knowing about Muggle weapons and therefore protecting himself against them.
"' . . . Some people, Salazar Slytherin included, believed that if the muggle born witches and wizards gained political power, and became our equals in every sense, that they would start to erase our culture and way of life, in favour of our own.. . .'"
I think you meant "in favour of THEIR own"?
" . . . A little bit of honey, just like he always made for himself at Private drive. . . ."
Should be Privet Drive.
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July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter I have no idea where tis is going but I'm most intrested