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person Tesgura
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe Harry ended up going with that bastard back to the Durseley's! Fucking Dumbledore! I hate him! I hope Lucius kills them, but doesn't get caught of course.
person starr
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Again Dubbles dork is an ass in this one too....did harry kill him ~!!! hope he did all of them ....pls. update soon Thanks 1!:):)):):
person Jan
schedule August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What the..... Can't Dumbledore just leave Harry in peace for once? Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^
person starr
schedule August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMFG NO don't let him go back there his family ???? will kill him....please do something !!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tesgura
schedule August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no no no NO! Harry can't go back to the Dursley's! He just can't! There won't be any sexy fun Lucius there and no clothes will be burnt, and Harry will get beaten and Draco won't be confused as hell about everything!
person starr
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok Luzy has lost his mind !!!!! and Harry is very close behind him !!!!!
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness this is hilarious! I'm not typically a Lucius/Harry fan but I love the way you've written Malfoy Senior. He's so incredibly neurotic and well...insane, at moments I really am rather worried for Harry. But before he gave in and was constantly grumbling about Harry's clothes was priceless (loved when Harry went into a fit and mixed up his tea in retribution as well) and there is something undeniably hot about how these two have been interacting.

Poor Draco, I feel like having your dad go off the hinges like this and with your best friend no less, has to be rather traumatic. It's hard to picture these two having a happily ever after but I find that I don't really care about all the what ifs because I'm enjoying all the hilarity and sexiness too much to be bothered. Can't wait for more!

On another note I just wanted to ask if you're still planning on finishing Intangible? I've been dying for an update! Also that's so awesome that you're taking the leap and writing your own thing, you are an amazing writer and I wish you the best of luck.
person Lovette
schedule August 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! This version of Lucius is just amazingly sexy. I can't wait to read more! bravo! excellent writing!
person VSBree
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story and its premise. You have a great writing style; it is very inviting. Descriptive without being overly so, and crazy hot!! You have inspired me to read any other stories you may have just to get another look at your writing. Keep up the fab work!!
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please u have to update
My god what a place to stop!!