rate_review Reviews

Lucy is one of my most hated characters from the Harry Potter series, but you made me like him for a few minutes. Good job there, even though I still wanted to punch him in the face when he was getting smug. Nice sex scene.

First, I saw your note, and I thank you for kindness.

Second, through most of this story I was giggling like a naughty schoolgirl. I loved how they were daring each other to make the first move. Made me think of a potato chip commercial where the man said "Yes, my friend, you are bold. But are you also... daring?" A BIG yes on both accounts.

I enjoyed the premise and telling of the story, especially the attention to detail of how their relationship develops separately at first.

The ending felt very rushed though.. The pace didn't match the rest of a carefully constructed and intriguing tale.

Looking forward to reading more of the series

Nice. I especially liked the part where he comes up behind her in her bedroom.
Looking forward to more wonderful oneshots from you.
Thanks!

Loved it! I really enjoy your writing style and how all of your characters interact with each other.