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for Tales of The Dragon and The Bookworm

by cpetnm

person General Crow
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Healing with a twist. A very interesting twist. Shows that sexual fulfillment doesn't have to be going all the way. Another interesting twist was having Harry being Rose's father. The fact that Hermione and Rose live a somewhat lonely life, I'm guessing the Weasleys want nothing to do with her? And would Draco be OK with Hermione using her special healing techniques on others when they do take that step towards romance? I guess we'll have to wait for the second part. By the way. Great to be hearing from you again.
person Mary
schedule December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahh chapter 10 really resonated with me. Good work.
person Trelweny
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was a little... creepy and disturbing. And yet at the same time oddly sweet. I'm at odds about it. Still wonderfully done.

I think that I need to stop trying to post reviews on my phone. I Swear I typed something up for the last chapter, which I loved by the way, but I think my phone ate it. heh.

Thanks so much for writing.
person Missus_G
schedule December 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this one's a bit darker. Can't have light without the dark, though, right? Thanks for the thanks, and for the update ;)
person General Crow
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's different from your usual route. This story had gotten me to the point where still I can't decide rather to kill him slowly (quickly would be consider too merciful), or kidnap Hermione and Scorpius and do my own brand of psychological torture on that inbreeded ferret. Great job twisting this up. I know you enjoy my reviews, so did this one meet your expectations? I'm still waiting on the elevator sex.

I will check out the thread and hopefully have better luck with that than I did with the forum.

My Aunt Tami has been doing fine. Her youngest son and his wife visited her last week, so she was as all sunshine and rainbows.
person jekodama
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The last one was the most disturbing Dramione I've read in a long time. I loved it, and I kind of hated it, because I cannot imagine Hermione being like that, but it was wonderfully written.
person Callie
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love these stories! I'm a huge fan of one shots in general simply because they aren't long enough to be forced to used cliched twists, but your writing is really excellent! Not just the way you present the stories, but your ideas are creative each time! This chapter in particular convinced me to write a review just because it's shows you aren't afraid to write an ending that isn't exactly "happily ever after". And honestly, this Draco is very believable!

You really are great at keeping them in character even in these different situations. A lot of people turn hermione into some hormonal bimbo but I love how you can make a story sexual without jeopardizing her character. This chapter really shows it too because you can see how controlling Draco is but how easy it is for her to brush it off in order to avoid a conflict. She's not an idiot but she's still a human with flaws. Please keep writing and happy holidays!
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's scary how realistic you've made this most recent tale. Well done...I'll be thinking about this one for a while.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 10

Wow. That got...dark.O_o
person Missus_G
schedule December 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww, very sweet! I enjoyed it very much. I'm sorry to hear the series will be drawing to a close, but I'm sure we'll see more fantastic work from you! Thanks for the update!