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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The cards sound interesting, I quite like the idea of this sub plot while the main story develops. For possible questions how about: name a country that you would like to visit? How many children would be the ideal for you? What would be a romantic night out for you? Name something that you have always wanted to try or experience? If you could have one wish, what would it be? Name a place (other than a bed) that you would like to have sex? What was your reason for assisting in helping to win the war? Just some ideas, don't feel like you have to use them.
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was so good. I need another update. Quick k please.
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September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i don't have any questions yet, but I LOVE the idea of the game and getting to know your partner so well. I hope he starts to understand what kind of a person she really is and stops distrusting everything and looking for double meanings. I also hope she can feel more comfortable with his silences and blank faces, since she will know in general that it's not about her. Thanks!!! HG4eva
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September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy your stories, but I'm really into this one now (only found it yesterday)... The cards are a clever idea indeed! I'd love to hear what Snape thought of Hermione really when she was younger. or how he felt when key people in his life died (Voldemort, dumbledore, his mother...). From Hermione, I'd love to hear if she was ever attracted to Harry; bet Snape is rather possessive, so maybe he asks about how far she went with Victor, Ron or anyone else. In a weak moment I'm sure he may ask about how She truly feels about him .
Oooohhhhh I'm hoping they both ask some hot and naughty questions too, the type that fuel the sexual tension or lead to action (self indulgent and together)
Can't wait to see the types of questions that get asked
Oooohhhhh I'm hoping they both ask some hot and naughty questions too, the type that fuel the sexual tension or lead to action (self indulgent and together)
Can't wait to see the types of questions that get asked
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September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Me again, to clarify my tired ramblings, I did read and review a few days ago but only found the updates last night.. Sorry, if my previous post was confusing...
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
trop beau merci pour ces chapitres continu
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August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the Haunted House idea!
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August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11
In your A/N you said, " . . . And Last But Never The Least...Hermione can wear whatever she wants even if its green make up with a green dress...just because green is generally a Slytherin color doesn't mean its out of the question and if she saw it that way then to me Hermione would be very immature. Also, sorry if I have said 'they' too many times, I'm trying to work sixty hours a week and write theses stories and believe me there will be some mistakes that'll escape me. I apologize."
I have to assume that this is a reference to my comments on Chapters 7 & 8 because I didn't find similar comments from anyone else. My query about the "green makeup" wasn't because it's the Slytherin color, but because my mind instantly visualized Hermione with an all-green face, like Elphaba in "Wicked." I feel more than a little foolish about leaving that review since I now realize you meant that her eye makeup was green, not her whole face. *blush* Unless of course there's a new cosmetics fad that I'm not aware of - always a possibility!
Regarding the "they" confusion, I have to stand by what I said. The sentence is too vague. When I read it I had no idea who Merida Van Holt was going to talk to about the changes made by (presumably) someone in the Ministry, which apparently the first person or persons needed to okay before the proceedings could go forward. If you're working sixty hours a week and also writing, then yes, mistakes will undoubtedly be made. Frankly, I don't know how you have any energy left over to write at all! Me, I'd be plopping into bed the minute I got home! At any rate, I apologize if my comments upset you in any way. That was not my intent.
And now for the actual review: Good chapter! It's good that they're beginning to get closer to a true relationship.
In your A/N you said, " . . . And Last But Never The Least...Hermione can wear whatever she wants even if its green make up with a green dress...just because green is generally a Slytherin color doesn't mean its out of the question and if she saw it that way then to me Hermione would be very immature. Also, sorry if I have said 'they' too many times, I'm trying to work sixty hours a week and write theses stories and believe me there will be some mistakes that'll escape me. I apologize."
I have to assume that this is a reference to my comments on Chapters 7 & 8 because I didn't find similar comments from anyone else. My query about the "green makeup" wasn't because it's the Slytherin color, but because my mind instantly visualized Hermione with an all-green face, like Elphaba in "Wicked." I feel more than a little foolish about leaving that review since I now realize you meant that her eye makeup was green, not her whole face. *blush* Unless of course there's a new cosmetics fad that I'm not aware of - always a possibility!
Regarding the "they" confusion, I have to stand by what I said. The sentence is too vague. When I read it I had no idea who Merida Van Holt was going to talk to about the changes made by (presumably) someone in the Ministry, which apparently the first person or persons needed to okay before the proceedings could go forward. If you're working sixty hours a week and also writing, then yes, mistakes will undoubtedly be made. Frankly, I don't know how you have any energy left over to write at all! Me, I'd be plopping into bed the minute I got home! At any rate, I apologize if my comments upset you in any way. That was not my intent.
And now for the actual review: Good chapter! It's good that they're beginning to get closer to a true relationship.
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August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
First, I love your chapter titles, especially this one, lol. But . . . I have to say that Snape seems totally OOC in this. Given that he's being forced to marry, I can't really see him being that friendly to Hermione. I don't think he would be as disagreeable as we saw in Canon, but he's gone a bit too far in the other direction. JMO, of course, and it hasn't stopped me from enjoying this.
First, I love your chapter titles, especially this one, lol. But . . . I have to say that Snape seems totally OOC in this. Given that he's being forced to marry, I can't really see him being that friendly to Hermione. I don't think he would be as disagreeable as we saw in Canon, but he's gone a bit too far in the other direction. JMO, of course, and it hasn't stopped me from enjoying this.
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August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7
Okay, it makes sense that Hermione should live at Hogwarts, but why does she have to sell her house? Why not keep it for a summer residence after they're married? Why does the Ministry have any say in where they live, for that matter? Something seems fishy here.
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Okay, it makes sense that Hermione should live at Hogwarts, but why does she have to sell her house? Why not keep it for a summer residence after they're married? Why does the Ministry have any say in where they live, for that matter? Something seems fishy here.
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