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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok they are working together on this, let's see what happens next ...loved it and thanks for the update !!!!!
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am screaming and hiding behind the couch in anticipation of the reveal. Talk about stress!
I normally don't really enjoy fem Harry but this is a good read
I normally don't really enjoy fem Harry but this is a good read
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July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just can't stop thinking that Draco is going to have a great fit when he finds out the thats Harry and Harry will be crushed !!!!! thanks for the update and please update soon !!!!!!!!
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July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so fantastic! I think this is one of my new favorite HP fanfics of all time. Great work and I can't wait to see how this continues. Eek!
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July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Snape is to smart for his good !!!! can't believe that he knows it's Harry....wow Draco really liked or loved Harry with the pic of him ...hope it all goes well for those two !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!! see you soon :):)
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July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting more interesting with each update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE SOON YES !!!! :):):)
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July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style and the idea of Harry turning into a female for 5 days a month. But I have also some issues with your story.
- Your characters are ooc, especially Draco and Harry. Hopefully the snark comes back when Draco discovers Celestes secret!
- Harry accepts this new body to smoothly, there is no real freaking out on his part, no mention of him trying to get to know this new body, to see how it 'ticks', how different it is from his male body. I'm sure there are many readers who would appreciate a scene where he does some exploring...
- He is a suspicously convincing girl from the start, without any training. In both bodies. Of course that could also be a hint to another secret still to be discovered.
- The dress in first chapter is WAY to short, I dare say in (at least British) poorblood society they would look upon someone dressed like that as a harlot. Just think about the movies: grown women didn't even show their ankles and the schoolgirls' skirts ended at the knees and underneeth they wore stockings so no skin was visible. Then again, we are talking about Zabinis mother, who has a somewhat questionable reputation herself...
- I don't understand why Harry would tell Pansy and Milicent but still keep Draco in the dark. He should at least have taken a vow from them to keep his secret. (To me, the shared bathroom is not a strong enough reason in a magical world and his threat, well, what good would killing them do him, when his secret was already revealed?)
But I'm really curious how things play out. Is Snape suspicous already? How will Harrys/Celestes first encounter with Ron and Hermione go? Will Celeste get molested by Milicent? And what will happen when the real Celeste realizes that American wizards are just too rude to here liking and decides to follow her original plan, going to her aunt and cousin and finishing her education in Hogwarts?! Well, okay, the last one will probalby not happen. ;)
- Your characters are ooc, especially Draco and Harry. Hopefully the snark comes back when Draco discovers Celestes secret!
- Harry accepts this new body to smoothly, there is no real freaking out on his part, no mention of him trying to get to know this new body, to see how it 'ticks', how different it is from his male body. I'm sure there are many readers who would appreciate a scene where he does some exploring...
- He is a suspicously convincing girl from the start, without any training. In both bodies. Of course that could also be a hint to another secret still to be discovered.
- The dress in first chapter is WAY to short, I dare say in (at least British) poorblood society they would look upon someone dressed like that as a harlot. Just think about the movies: grown women didn't even show their ankles and the schoolgirls' skirts ended at the knees and underneeth they wore stockings so no skin was visible. Then again, we are talking about Zabinis mother, who has a somewhat questionable reputation herself...
- I don't understand why Harry would tell Pansy and Milicent but still keep Draco in the dark. He should at least have taken a vow from them to keep his secret. (To me, the shared bathroom is not a strong enough reason in a magical world and his threat, well, what good would killing them do him, when his secret was already revealed?)
But I'm really curious how things play out. Is Snape suspicous already? How will Harrys/Celestes first encounter with Ron and Hermione go? Will Celeste get molested by Milicent? And what will happen when the real Celeste realizes that American wizards are just too rude to here liking and decides to follow her original plan, going to her aunt and cousin and finishing her education in Hogwarts?! Well, okay, the last one will probalby not happen. ;)
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July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My favorite line this chapter... 'Because you
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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The starting is great! Can't wait for the next update.