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for Peace in the Darkness

by UpTheHill

person Skybee
schedule October 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So she ends up with Ron in the end?

That was a crazy skip in the story, I kind of feel cheated, I can understand though as it is your first fic.
It just seemed like we were in the middle of the story and BAM skip and end, I was getting excited to know what she does too.

I'm kinda confused.
person Marvolo
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! sad to see it end. Loved the epilogue. You English is perfect but I hope you still write more stories.
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW - I cannot believe English is not your native language (mine is not!) You write so well, I like this a lot - so good also! I will read ch 2 now!
person Marvolo
schedule July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Grea stry so far can't wait to read ore. How much will Hermione find out and will she be able to help
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schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!loved it, looking
forward to your posts