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for His Fathers Mistakes

by TheKitten

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person katsplay68

schedule January 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

WHAT'S NEXT!!!!!! UGH please finish. (Begging on knees)

person Mgriffith490

schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story please update it soon.

person Rae

schedule February 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Shut up and continue writing! ;-)

person kimberlie

schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

OMG you need to write more and in a major hurry! im running out of stories to read!

person Delia Cerrano

schedule November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Oh my poor Severus! But how does Harry get involved in this years later except as some one Severus would dislike because of the memory of this with James? I love this couple! They are my favorite "Harry Potter" couple.

person etoile

schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM

I love your verry firt chapiter.
I can not wait to read chapiter 2.Please, can you tell me when you post the next chapiter.
Thank you in advance.

Grieve for possible mistakes ,but English is not my native language.

person sheepcat

schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Hi there! Interesting story so far, it really like it if you continued :)
Though I have to say that you'd need a beta reader as there are many distracting mistakes that could be prevented.
Other than that: you go, girl! :D

person sheepcat

schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Hi there! Interesting story so far, I'd really like it if you continued :)
Though I have to say that you'd need a beta reader as there are many distracting mistakes that could be prevented.
Other than that: you go, girl! :D

person Cair

schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this!

person delia_cerrano

schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM

What a sad but intriguing start...anxicus to see how you develop this into a Severus/Harry story.

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