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for The Dust of Water

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooo, poor Kreacher (there
person moodysavage
schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ron and Hermione just make me want to knock them over the head for being stupid. They were friends with Harry all through school. They KNOW him even if it's just their memory of him. Their friend didn't disappear... it would be like if they went back in time with a time turner and needed to interact with Harry as he was in school. If anything they should feel like protecting him because he is mentally back like a teenager compared to them. Arggg... I can't explain it but they need a swift kick in the rear.
schedule November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good!

I love the growing bond between the two.

How many chapters are you planning on? Can I ask how old you are? It
person SP777
schedule October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #19...

Man, I don't know if Draco has any clue about ''what he wants''. j/k :-)
person moon
schedule October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah romance. Welcome :) It wasn't until this chapter that I could see how these two could have any sort of romantic connection. The premise is sooo good!
schedule October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well, finally malfoy confessed. And harry is not completely ruling it out, huh.
person moon
schedule October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah.. so nice. Harry has some help now.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well things changed huh.
Can't wait for more.

Sev.
person SP777
schedule October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #18..

Is it possible we are finally going to see a light at the end of this dark tunnel?
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW, malfoy is so twisted in this.