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for The Dust of Water

by Lomonaaeren

person moodysavage
schedule December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
lol Draco is feeling pretty special and important and all around pleased right now. It's rather endearing :)
person SP777
schedule December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

Yes indeed...Harry whooped that a$$ and he should have TORN the clothes off
that a$$ and got busy faster. Oh well, there's next time...
schedule November 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Shiit that was hawt
person SP777
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #23..

some people waking up and realizing that Hogwarts is losing its reputation as the premiere school in wizarding Europe.
For some reason, reading that line feels...sad to me, I always want Hogwarts to be #1 in all things.

I don't know if you wrote the other chapter yet, but...I HOPE Harry smokes Draco's ass dueling! :-)
person moon
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah sexual tension. Hello!haha. Yes I know that Harry is still unaware but it's wafting from Draco. I love it.
person moon
schedule November 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah sexual tension. Hello!haha. Yes I know that Harry is still unaware but it's wafting from Draco. I love it.
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Those two - so sexy togtether in this, even though thay aren
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uuuh, Harry is not noticing the little gestures he is making with Draco, in this chapters overing his hans with his own.

Uuuh, getting closer they are!

Fucking Kelvin.

Usually I can figure out a story pretty easily, but this one - huh...
person moodysavage
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
True it would be hard to remember and react as you would have in the past.
person moon
schedule November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it