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for The Dust of Water

by Lomonaaeren

person moodysavage
schedule August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo lol... is it wrong that I find the end of this funny? I can't decided who's expression would be funniest... Rob's disappointment and maybe defensiveness because he had a relationship with Harry first and he was excited to get an answer about a possible 2nd chance but got interrupted. Or Draco being shocked again by Harry who is caught in a compromising position that he wouldn't expect from young Harry or older Harry. Or Harry... (I think I pick Harry) who can't remember being attracted to men but just got caught like that with one from his 'recent' rival who used to give him a hard time about everything... and now this! He must think Draco is doomed to witness all his worst moments lol.

And now I'm dying to know what's next :)
person moodysavage
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is so freakin' interesting. I really like that Harry has this young, sincere and honest vibe going and it's interesting how a mature Draco is going to react to that. And I guess that powder explains how Harry could let himself do all those horrible things but I think the worst knowledge has yet to come.
person SP777
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Damn...if I didn't know better I swear he was doing some type of cocaine. O_o
person moon
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it :)
person starr
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Does Ginny know that harry was with that guy Rob or that he likes men ?? man o man Harry was a prick in the past, but I do understand that he needs to know everything to change it now if he wants to !!!!! Thank you for the update !!!! BTW Hermione does she know or image any of this ????
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I started reading this also.
you know I hate you for writing too many stories for me to keep up, yes? 😂

So I need to know, how old are you, female or male? How the hell can you have time gor so many stories? Do you only write or read too? Do you have chapters written before you begin posting a story because you write so many at the same time?

About this. I read chapter one, really liking it, but harry thinks he is 17 right? But he is really 27? And was 22 when the curse hit him?

Severus1snape
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My god is just caught up.
this is dark and amazing and sad and oh my... more please

Severus1snape
person SP777
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

I guess the last chapter in a way felt for a minute like...you're going to open
up a closet in an old, decrepit foreboding house...and find yourself looking at
an image of you, with a bloody knife and manic grin.

...yes, that is a little left field, but it's like a scary movie, you don't want
to look, but you can't help it. Anyway, it was just a brief feeling.

In this chapter I'm glad he split from Ginny, I get the feeling she would have been in
the way of...something important, not sure what.
person moodysavage
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo glad that Harry made a clean break from Ginny and without massive loads of guilt. I think too much guilt would hinder him in finding out what he wants to do with his life and realizing that he is who he is now and doesn't have to apologize for it will be a very big step. And it's natural for him to not feel anything much towards Draco because that's the way it was in the past other than dislike and annoyance lol. Though Draco knowing more about his past will create an opening that will let Harry find out how Draco has changed but also give Harry someone to sound off to. Think he might tell hermione someday? Anyway... I really like how this chapter progressed the story. Harry is being straightforward and true to himself... and taking advice from hermione lol.
person starr
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so happy to see that he has the guts to tell Ginny no !!!!! and also that he is not going to go back to being an author .. Thanks for the update !!!!