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about The End...

This definitely has potential to go further.

thanks for this, loved the ending , it fit the storyline !!!!!!!!

Even with the fighting its still an `awww` story. :) The dove with claws representing love was an interesting way to describe love and I very much liked the floor stopping them from fighting.

about #4...

Damn Harry...angry much??? Is it JUST me or is Draco a glutton for punishment?

How will you end this in a 5 shot story???? Too many things seem unresolved between them.

Sitting and waiting on an oil change and I just laughed and laughed over this! I am so glad I was alone. I can so picture them all self righteous (though it's Draco who keeps escalating things) and that fight was hilarious... A competition to see who was stupider lol.

so because of the Dursely's Harry thinks liking boys is bad and then there goes Draco again attacking him and all hell gets loose don't know these two boys are going nuts here...Dubbles is not helping !!!!!!! thanks for the update can't wait to see what happens now after that fight !!!!!!!

yea well poor dear Draco is in his own trap !!!! will not admit it but it seams he likes Harry if that second kiss had that reaction on him !!!!!! Thanks for the update see you soon :):):)

Oh this is good... how in the world did I miss it before? My favorite line in chapter 2? When Harry thought that Wesley thought himself funny despite all evidence to the contrary lol. And it was so funny how Draco is just so focused on bugging Harry that he was willing to tease Harry like that because it worked even though he was appalled about the kiss. And I totally like Snape in this. I liked seeing him viciously threaten Draco to leave Harry alone. It feels different when he threatens Draco than when he threatens Harry... probably because Draco deserves it lol. And apparently Snape understood more of what was going on than Draco since he warned him one last time before Draco went to confront Harry in detention. And he knew to watch for Draco too!

That was rather sexy how Harry lured Draco into the detention room to do what he wanted... and then laughed about it lol. Very funny :)

about #3...

*hides in the bed listening to Harry's maniacal laughter* Dude... O_O

Malfoy stepped closer. Harry stayed standing innocently still..
Like a silent predator in the wild, the snake creeps upon his prey and before
the prey has a chance to realize the danger it is in, the snake STRIKES.

Man, this got real interesting.