AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Curious Case of Luna Lovegood

by Marvolo

schedule September 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!! Omg its just getting better and better!!;
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!!! I love it can't wait for the next!!
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Just wow!!! Amazing chapter!!!
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!!
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, but why do you resist taking advice about grammar? Please, please, please do more editing before posting.
schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Hermione got the reports and harrys got the key!!!
person kas
schedule July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
this was soooo amazing!!
i loved every second of it
more i tell you
i need more!!
person hf2114
schedule July 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I hope you find a beta because your spelling sucks! If you can't, just go back and read it slowly and see where you made a mistake. If this wasn't so god I wouldn't have bothered to even tell you. Your good you just need a little help. Full marks! Here's to a better you.
schedule July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!!! So the waitress did something to the pudding!!! No she's not dead just passed out I hope!!
person firetemplar415
schedule July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That's a fucked up ending.....
I'm liking the story so far....but the grammar has been really painful to sift through. And it takes a lot from the story to be constantly correcting errors throughout the chapters. Please work on them my dear author.
Best of luck with the story,

-fire