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for Loyalties

by ChimaeraChan

person moodysavage
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... that was awesome. Draco's revenge was inspired and I loved that whole scene in the Great Hall and when Ron tried to get Harry to stop going after Draco. Harry so didn't care about his audience lol. And I loved how Harry kept trying to get Draco to admit that he belonged to Harry but Draco just wouldn't cooperate lol. Anyway, great job :)

Since Draco bonded with Harry, does that mean Harry does not have to bite Draco or will he still do that?
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fucking HOT!! Stumbled upon this just today and so glad I did! Love where this story is going and can't wait to read more ~\(^_^)/~
person misssy
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
when did harry cheat? i dont get what the revenge was about.
person ChaosLady
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet! And sexy! Excellent update.
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I only have time to read the first chapter tonight (and might I say grrrr to my damn time restrictions) but I am utterly hooked! I love Draco in this, smart and sassy but also strong and vicious. At first I was completely pre-occupied with trying to figure out what was going on with him and his "beasts" but by the end I don't really even care if I ever find out the specifics because DAMN that was HOT and I really like how Draco doesn't even know everything about his "blood". Makes it feel like we're right along side him in it.

I love how Harry couldn't seal the deal because of his conscious and how he tasked Draco with finding him. I seriously can't wait to read the next part and your writing it amazing. I think it's safe to say I'm quickly becoming one of your biggest fans :)
person starr
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this just is getting hotter by the minute here !!!!!! next please !!:):)
person starr
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow so hot !!!!! MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Please keep going and update soon!