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I reviewed awakening and talked about how awesome this story was I also said it was a pwp but its not! Its got a pretty cool plot. But just happened to focused on getting those two hotties fucking. Which is awesome.

So good these two !!!!! thanks for this !!!!!!!! Enjoyed very much !!

Oh gosh, amazing, simply amazing. I'm torn because you did such an awesome job with this and I'm sure this is one of those stories I'll keep coming back to and so very sad it's over - because seriously this story was so good. My only consolation is knowing that your going to write something new and soon (right? RIGHT?).

Okay so first off - Harry and Lucius? Oh gosh, I was in the same boat as Harry, I think I even glared suspiciously at my computer screen for a bit until it sunk in and then I burst out laughing. How utterly perfect of those two to come together over Draco and Crazy Bellatrix. And Draco being worried because Harry was late - adorable!

"Draco scowled, staring at his shoes. This was fucking miserable, caring all the time. And it wasn't a nice, bearable quiet caring. No, it was this loud, retarded aching caring that made Draco want to hurt people. Or maybe just slam his head into the wall really hard a couple hundred times to stop having to feel anything at all. Fucking Potter." - Honestly this line = perfection to me.

I loved how Harry stung Draco back up and made him tell him Draco loved him, sweet and kinky - a wonderful mix indeed. And that last chapter, yes I may have been grinning the entire time like a loon. Seriously it was a bit ridiculous but the entire thing was just so sweet and cute and made me want to squish them. Plus I may be like your Harry and have this small - lets be honest, huge - thing for them either getting caught or overheard. That scene in the bathroom was amazingly hot and the end perfect (except I wanted more damn you).

There is so much going on in the wings of this story but I loved how it all was like a pricking at the backs of their minds because they were so focused on each other. Can't wait for your next story!

The last two chapters were definitely amusing. Great story!

Great ending! Excellent dirty talk, too, lol! Don't tease about an epic length drarry, I'll stalk you till you do it so get busy and let us know where you post it. There's another site I read that has easier search tools but I've bookmarked you here so keep updating on new stories. Thank you! XXOO!

Alrighty I'm all caught up and may I say wow, just...wow. There is so many things I'm enjoying about this, for a story that really doesn't have all that much plot like you said it still FEELS like it does, where I feel very invested in their relationship whereas I don't normally get in PWP's you know? Anyway this just keeps getting sexy and hotter, I love that their both rather dominate and willing to go either way, I think it fits wonderfully, and Draco's little(big) prank was awesome and ended in a seriously, amazingly hot scene. I adore how cute Harry finds angry Draco and how they keep just pushing each other. Draco's conflicting feelings feel very in character for him as does Harry's unwillingness to claim him until he admits it (and by gods Draco admit it already, you'll feel better, I promise!)

"Something about Harry was making him crazy... Made him want to do terrible sweet things... It was an unsettling feeling, and Draco thought maybe he wouldn't let Harry blow him again if the Gryffindor was going to insist on being so romantic about it." - Loved this line, think it sums up a lot about the blonde.

Oh and Draco's revenge on the Slytherins - brilliant! I also love Ron's resigned attitude in this, I find him rather funny. I could probably go on gushing about every little bit I like but that may end up the length of an essay so I shall cut myself sort. Just know I'm loving it and can't wait to read the last chapter (With fingers crossed for an epilogue)

Update soon!

Love this story. Please keep posting! I want MOAR!! Reading your other stories now too, love your style! Excellent tension buildup in chapter 4. Also first writer that has made me really like stories where drarry switch, so there's no all top/all bottom dynamic. Both strong characters, but vulnerable at the same time. Draco seems to respond most to power, so being "taken" makes sense for him, so I hope you write a story arc where Harry's insistence he "ask" for the mark puts Draco in danger forcing Harry to realize he's wrong in his assumption about Draco. Need some good ole rescue trope sex, lol! Harry saves Draco from lustful Voldie (make Vold look like Tom though, bc snake face sex makes my lady boner go bye bye). Please keep this story up, it's really my favorite and I'm excited to see what happens next!

Is Draco a stubborn git or what? Excellent update!

I really enjoyed this story until the end of the second chapter. I still read the entire third chapter, but even realizing the full concept behind it, I feel sickened.

I enjoy Harry/Draco. Specifically Harry/Draco. I dont really like stories where Draco is the Dominate. This story had no real attempt or method for preparing me for that and the entire chapter I was sitting here with such an intense feeling of dislike that I wanted to throw up. And I am not exaggerating. I am quite happy to see that this "claiming" isnt a sole act that forces Harry to be submissive to Draco permanently, and instead is something that Harry needs to do to Draco as well, however the intense dislike and unease I had due to this chapter makes me feel as though I will never be able to enjoy this ever again.

The immediate submissive acts of Harry, the entire chapter of Harry dealing with his situation or begging Draco, it all built up into something that I am sure wasnt the full intentions of yourself, however the story writes itself and I now wish I had never seen this story.

A little too violent for my tastes but still good.