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for Muggle Things

by RavieSnake

person T-W-O
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love Odin. And it figures that a wizard would want to watch every car movie ever made. Do I sense correctly that Crooks has made a pet of Draco?
person Victoria
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Gene's discussion of the meaning of his tattoo and Draco's explanation of his own mark and then his profession of love for Hermione are simply brilliant dialogue. We learn so much about these two men in this exchange. Beautifully written.
person DaFossil
schedule March 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update! The withdrawal pains have been absolutely horrible. I am loving the Father-in-law/son-in-law action. In many ways it is like the relationship between my husband and father since my husbands father died when he was three. Put the two of them together and they always created mischief. And reveled in it.
person tsita
schedule January 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That father to son in law talk! So beautiful I wanted to cry! What a great story, thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter!
person ssdawn
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The male bonding between Draco and Hermione's father was awesome. It needed to happen. Draco needed a chance to
speak and express his intentions.
person Priscillaxx
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
First of all I want to say that I absolutely adore this story. If red it for 3/4 times already and I cannot get enough of it. And wel could you maybe do something like that Hermione takes Draco to a theme park or something? I think it would be really fun!

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person poppycrxwn
schedule January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful, Draco casting his Patronus before Hermione's dad. I'm in love with this story, thank you so much for sharing this with us! I am so tempted to say I can't wait for the next update, but I can; I will wait for the next update patiently because quality takes time. Please, take your time! :)
schedule January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Good for Draco for standing up for himself and explaining why he felt how he felt for Hermione. No doubt, he left Mr. Granger in a state of shock there. And having a grandmother who was a witch? What an interesting take. Can't wait to see how that all goes! Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Victoria
schedule January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Draco's speech to Gene Granger about Hermione is one of the most heartfelt, moving Draco soliloquys I've ever read. Beautifully written. I alos am impressed with how you've made Hermione's father come to life. He's usually written as just a two-dimensional background character, but your Gene is interesting and has a history worth reading. Well done.
person Trelweny
schedule January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! What a great maale bonding experience.

I had forgotten about the Daily Prophet from the flat. O_O That could have gone loads worse.

Thanks so much for writing! Made my night.