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for Muggle Things

by RavieSnake

schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can't even make myself wait to read when I see you've updated this story. lol I tried. I lasted all of 10 minutes. :-) Anyway, I can't believe how much I love this little family!! Her parents are PERFECT and the way you write them I completely see bits of her in each of them. It's wonderful. I also truly appreciate your ability to mix serious and funny moments, like they happen in real life. His explanation of his reasons for wanting to know more about muggle life was sweet and I am really glad she let him explain, instead of flying off the handle, even if she did get a bit defensive initially. His gnome fear made me laugh out loud and his replacement of her ring made me sigh in happiness. I love this story and thank you again for every word! HG4eva
person cpetnm
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think you forgot the chapter ending? ;) I like when D&H talk about their relationship. And now I'm dying to know what Ron's problem is.
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I have to say, it was hard for me to see Draco so vulnerable, but I enjoy this story quite a lot. Update soon, please!
person Anna Doherty
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story hope your going to continue with it.
schedule March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love!!! Finally, another writer who gets the non-cliche of Hermione and Draco. Please continue. I know I'll keep reading!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! New chapter, I kept checking back. Thank you!
schedule March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
First, I was STUPID happy to see update. :-) Thank you! I loved how they, as a family, got through that. The scene of her mother and the fast food, acting like we normally see with Hermione with Ron and Harry, was great! I also really loved that her father encouraged Draco to do magic, therefore showing his acceptance and trust. Beautiful! Thanks for letting us see Harry and Ginny. :) I am sorry he's so stressed out, though. I also wonder how Ginny feels about Hermione with that line about how she should have seen it coming. Man, I love this story!! I am glad to know we won't have a long wait for the next update. Thanks!! HG4eva
person lovey_reader
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. I really love this story. Chap 19 was o need of the best. I think I almost cried. It was brilliant how the father relates his time in the service with Dracos. I really loved how they connected. You know if I had millions and it was my first time at a fast food restaurant I think I too would order one of everything. That's awesome!!! I can't wait to find out what's in Narcissas letter. I really can't wait for the next chapter.
person Trelweny
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
haha! Every time I read about a pureblood trying sodapop for the first time I laugh and cringe at the same time. But then, I don't like ANYTHING bubbly and High Fructose Corn Syrup makes me quite ill. I let my throwback/heritage (whatever) Dr. Peppers go flat before drinking them. LoL Still only once in a blue moon. Mr. Granger is certainly nothing like MY dentist! Fast food indeed! But I love the mental picture of having EVERYTHING from the menu. O_O How'd they even get it home? Hold the phone... Mr. Granger wasn't worried about greasy fast food in his Baby? O_O Woah... Poor Crookshanks and Odin... Poor Harry. *pause* I suppose I should forgive Ginevra for being a bit bitchy on account of her pregnancy... Even if I DO agree that the "safe" letters should be forwarded on to the happy couple. Thanks so much for writing!
schedule March 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
can´t wait to read about the letters