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August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
There aren't nearly enough reviews for this wonderful fic. I suppose I'm a latecomer, since the story is finished, but I'm less than halfway through and I was dying to tell you how much I'm enjoying it!
I read the original at the restricted section just a few months ago, and when I came back here a couple days ago I was so very excited, first to see that you had continued it and then also by the direction the story took.
You are an excellent writer and I am thoroughly engrossed by both the steamy interactions of the characters and the little insights I'm gaining into their lives, feelings, and budding romance. And after being on a snamione jag for so long, the way you've written Draco was the perfect way to remind me that I love him, too :)
And of course I have to reiterate, LOVE the hot sex! I especially love Snape's handling of Hermione in her insecurities about her kinks.
I could go on, but there's only so much reading time I can steal away, so I'm off to see what happens next. Well done, and thank you for sharing it!
I read the original at the restricted section just a few months ago, and when I came back here a couple days ago I was so very excited, first to see that you had continued it and then also by the direction the story took.
You are an excellent writer and I am thoroughly engrossed by both the steamy interactions of the characters and the little insights I'm gaining into their lives, feelings, and budding romance. And after being on a snamione jag for so long, the way you've written Draco was the perfect way to remind me that I love him, too :)
And of course I have to reiterate, LOVE the hot sex! I especially love Snape's handling of Hermione in her insecurities about her kinks.
I could go on, but there's only so much reading time I can steal away, so I'm off to see what happens next. Well done, and thank you for sharing it!
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August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this whole story. I am re-reading it!! Your characters really have depth, but also manage to stay true to the originals. Your erotic scenes are hot, and your story is interesting. Great, great work. Thanks!! :)
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August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was amazing. Really. Thank you so much.
It's hard to find only a couple of things I liked - as I loved it all. But just to give you a small rundown:
The beautiful buildup of their intimacy and love. It was amazingly written and felt really genuine.
The part of fairy-tale that Hermione tells. It was magical and demonstrates how you show their mutual love. Really really liked their love and endearings to each other.
Of course the sex was written amazingly. So hot. My husband extends his many many thanks over the hotness of it and what it did to me (and him, as a result).
The part about Draco, his whole behaviour and relationship with Hermione was also very interesting. I enjoyed reading his parts a lot.
I really loved every little part of this fic, truly. But it was the love between Hermione and Severus that did it all so much nicer. You wrote their love so beautufully. Thank you ever so much.
And if this is a good place to beg for more writing than you should know I will be extremely happy to read.
It's hard to find only a couple of things I liked - as I loved it all. But just to give you a small rundown:
The beautiful buildup of their intimacy and love. It was amazingly written and felt really genuine.
The part of fairy-tale that Hermione tells. It was magical and demonstrates how you show their mutual love. Really really liked their love and endearings to each other.
Of course the sex was written amazingly. So hot. My husband extends his many many thanks over the hotness of it and what it did to me (and him, as a result).
The part about Draco, his whole behaviour and relationship with Hermione was also very interesting. I enjoyed reading his parts a lot.
I really loved every little part of this fic, truly. But it was the love between Hermione and Severus that did it all so much nicer. You wrote their love so beautufully. Thank you ever so much.
And if this is a good place to beg for more writing than you should know I will be extremely happy to read.
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July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So awesome. Thank you so much for your story
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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Have read it twice and keep going back to key chapters. Next story should be about Eros and what young Snape experienced there.
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June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Spent pretty much every spare minute of the last week reading this story. I loved it! Really well done!
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June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the story very much! I feel, however, the sex scenes are a bit repetitive for reading the story in one go. Also, I'd love to find out more about Draco in the epilogue. Does he find his own partner? Does he still maintain semi-regular sexual relationship with them?
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June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing! I love your writing style, I can't wait to read your other works!
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June 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I would like this but man was zi so wrong !!!!!!it was great !!!!!!! thanks !!!
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June 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was... intense. I can see that this was truly your "baby" -the level of detail and depth was resplendent. I felt all the characters' transitions were believable, which to me can make or break a story even when those characters are secondary.
While there was so much to like about this story I must confess my favorites (other than the main pairing's relationship growth) were the talismans (creation, giving, and reactions to each other) and the couple's ability to have such a wonderful relationship with Draco due to his growth. Very fun and very sweet.
I had kinda hoped we'd get to see another visit to Eros before the end, but ah well. Not to be.
If you ever feel so inclined you might want to go back through with a beta, editor, &/or grammar checker. Not much... but I noticed a fair amount of silly errors. In one chapter there was a "come come" I believe that seemed out of place and there were at least two "deserts" instead of "desserts" in two separate chapters, for example. Nothing to severely distract from the overall piece, but things to look for if wanting to really make it polished.
Of course a story this hot and both emotionally and physically intense shines on its own.
Thanks so much for writing! It was an absolute delight to read, and something I'm likely to read again.
While there was so much to like about this story I must confess my favorites (other than the main pairing's relationship growth) were the talismans (creation, giving, and reactions to each other) and the couple's ability to have such a wonderful relationship with Draco due to his growth. Very fun and very sweet.
I had kinda hoped we'd get to see another visit to Eros before the end, but ah well. Not to be.
If you ever feel so inclined you might want to go back through with a beta, editor, &/or grammar checker. Not much... but I noticed a fair amount of silly errors. In one chapter there was a "come come" I believe that seemed out of place and there were at least two "deserts" instead of "desserts" in two separate chapters, for example. Nothing to severely distract from the overall piece, but things to look for if wanting to really make it polished.
Of course a story this hot and both emotionally and physically intense shines on its own.
Thanks so much for writing! It was an absolute delight to read, and something I'm likely to read again.