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but how is she going to poop with the small anal plug inside her?? “Stay still,” he said. “This won’t hurt.” Something pressed into her hole, and Hermione tried to relax. “I’m inserting a small anal plug.” She tensed.

use the word CUNT !!!!!!!!!

i thought he wouldnt find her touching him in public?? i mean he had he show him her small anal plug !!!

i dont understand did he enter her yet?? if she is a virgin wont it hurt?? and have blood? Snape reached between their bodies and opened his trousers. Once his cock was free, he sank his fingers into her hips and pulled her forward. Her slit was drenched; there was no resistance or drag as she slid along the underside of his prick. The blistering heat of her body scorched him. Hermione’s swollen nub throbbed joyfully as she rode against him. She arched her back to keep her clit pressed against his unyielding length. Rocking her hips faster, she felt the tension of five long days straining to break free. Her body was primed to take off, and the rigid heat of him slipping between her thighs was sublime. She was a woman possessed. Snape’s fingers tightened, trying to keep her movements under control. The restraint only added to her fervor. If he hadn’t just indulged in a pre-emptive wank before her arrival, he would have lost it. Her frantic whispers of “please” were maddening. He knew there was only one way to end that particular torture. (And the sooner the better.) Touching his lips to her ear, he growled, “I want to watch you come all over my cock.”

I just did a spit-take at the end when Draco thought it was "hilarious." That was great.

Just LOVE it!

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This deserves 10x the reviews it has got. It's hot, sexy, romantic, cute. No matter what you're looking for in an SS/HG fic, this is it.

I wish I had reviewed it chapter by chapter for you, to bump up your review count and to give real credit where it's due. I will read this again and again. Thank you so much for posting it.

Absolutely steamy and delicious. Wonderfully written with a gorgeous style and beautiful grammar. Truly delicious and mouth-watering.

Extremely hot with Draco in there. Delicious.