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38. Bloody fantastic! I loved the cat! I have the urge to try in real life myself... so exciting and sexy. Thank you Fox xx

Dear Author, Another review as I promised. I've decided to review from the start. First chapter is absolutely amazing and it would stand perfectly on it's own as a one shot, but I'm eternally grateful that you've decided to continue. I wanted to let you know, that as a 'bloody foreigner' I find your writing very easy to read. Everything is perfectly worded and punctuation marks are where they should, making it a pleasure to read. Thousands of your words just flow through me uninterrupted, creating images, that imbed themselves in my conscious and unconscious mind. I wake up wet every day...I'm too single for that. Thank you Fox xx

Chapter 32. GOD why can't he say it back to her??? We all know that he loves her. This story keeps me on my toes! Crazy mixture of scary, funny and very sexy. I do love it. A lot. Or even more...hmmm...Definitely more. Yes.

I need to apologise for not reviewing your story so far. This is pure, hardcore sexiness, I love it. I'm all in with Hermione here. I probably wouldn't go that far with punishments and all, but I'm considering...since I started to read it I constantly have the worst case of wet knickers... God what have you done with me?! Thank you for that. I just finished reading about party at Weasley house and I have to say, this chapter is very funny -many of them are, I loved the cake ;-) Thank you. I promise I will be a good girl and will review more. Fox

I want to suck caramel and whipped cream off your cock in the middle of the Great Hall. I want to put mirrors all around your bed so I can watch you fuck me from every angle. And I read about a girl getting punished with an enema, and it made me so wet even though it scares me. Sweet Circe, what the hell is wrong with me?” Dizziness gripped her head, and the tub started to slowly spin. I’m going to pass out. I do hope this the below part of my comment isn’t your idea of an enema and that you do have him do a REAL enema on her as “punishment” ?? With a nod, he motioned to the other side of the tub. “Go bend over the edge. On your knees.” Her stomach flipped at the command. Sliding down his torso, she turned around and draped her upper body over the opposite side of the tub. Her bum was above the water, and she knew he must have one hell of a view of her pussy too. Sitting up behind her, he held up his hand. “Push out your plug.” Hermione swallowed hard then bore down, feeling the metal widen her hole and pop out. Catching it in his open palm, Snape watched her anus wink close then set the plug aside in the soap dish. He plucked the shower attachment from its bracket next to the faucet and held it under the water. Flipping up the silver lever, he switched the water’s destination so it came through the hose then he turned the spray setting from “massage” to “shower." I’ll have to thank Albus for updating the fixtures. This is coming in handier than I originally thought. Hermione could hear him doing something behind her but was too nervous to turn around. A soft spray of water ran over her crack, all the way down to her clit, causing her to involuntarily arch. His fingers parted her lips so the water tickled her sensitive nub. After lathering his other hand with soap, Snape pressed one finger up against her puckered hole and spread some of the sudsy slickness inside her. Moving into the tight ring of muscle, he imagined his cock entering her for the first time. Her muscles squeezed him in a vice grip. It would be magnificent. Moaning quietly as he stretched her open, Hermione thought about what it would be like to have him bugger her. Her pussy spasmed at the thought, images swirling through her head. How would he do it? What position would he use? She wanted to try it soon. Not that night, but soon. “Oh gods, more please, sir.” Smirking at her request, Snape added another finger. She tensed at first but then took some deep breaths and let him go deeper. He gently finger-fucked her tight passage. Keeping the spray on her clit, he waited for her to start begging. The slow burn of his soapy fingers was perfect. Closing her eyes, Hermione rested her head against her arms. She couldn’t stop her hips from rocking in time with his hand. A spark built in her core, and her clitoris began to ache. She needed more. Making her mouth form actual words instead of just moans, she whimpered, “Please, sir, I’m getting close.” I know. “Tell me what you want.” “Please make the water harder," she panted. "Make me come, sir." Severus flicked the shower head back to “massage” and grinned when she jumped. It was too hard, too sudden. Her hips pulled away from the spray and it teased at her opening instead. Heart pounding, Hermione tried rocking back over the spray. She could only take it in short bursts. Finding a rhythm, she let the spiking water alternate between her clit and her pussy as she rode his hand. Severus was almost completely hard again. Her grunting whines were shooting straight to his cock. He wanted to be inside her the next time she came so he could feel her clamping around him as she bucked and moaned. The feel of his fingers wriggling inside her and the beat of the water over her sex swirled together to form a perfect storm of sensation. The climax rolled over her. Her muscles pulsed around his fingers as her clit tripped over the spray. Hermione closed off the wail of agony behind pinched lips and pressed her mouth against her arm. When her movements slowed, he let the shower head fall under the water and sink to the bottom. Severus pulled his fingers from her bum and washed his hands, smirking at her groan of disappointment. Just give me a minute, pet. We’re not done. Easing her hips under the water, he rinsed out her squeaky-clean hole with one finger. “Can you stand?” he asked, sliding his thumb into her slippery snatch. Hermione jumped and made a high note of surprise into her arm. “Yes, sir.” Snape climbed out of the tub and got a towel. She stood unsteadily then followed him on to dry land. He wrapped the fluffy cotton around her and rubbed her dry, crouching down to get her lower body. She stared at him as if she’d never seen someone use a towel before. Snickering at her expression, Severus stood and wiped the remaining water from his own body. Her eyes were focused on his bouncing cock the whole time. “I would have done that for you, sir,” she said, speaking to his prick instead of his face. “Next time, pet. Right now I want you back in bed.”

they should have a SAFE WORD just incase !!!!!

WHERE DID THAT THOUGHT COME FROM AND WHY DID IT COME FROM HIS SLEEP?? Draco jerked back from the brink of sleep with sudden revelation. Oh my God, she’s shagging Snape. Staring at the dark ceiling, he burst out laughing. Sweet fucking Merlin, this is hilarious. Why didn’t I see it before? He’d have to be careful. Granger was formidable enough on her own, but Snape would tear him apart (and bury his body in the Forbidden Forest without a second thought). Draco didn’t dare tell anybody, but if he played his cards right, he could have some fun messing with her head. Oh Granger, you are one twisted little witch. He gradually drifted back to sleep, imagining what he was going to say to her the next day.

WHERE DID THAT THOUGHT COME FROM AND WHY DID IT COME FROM HIS SLEEP?? Draco jerked back from the brink of sleep with sudden revelation. Oh my God, she’s shagging Snape. Staring at the dark ceiling, he burst out laughing. Sweet fucking Merlin, this is hilarious. Why didn’t I see it before? He’d have to be careful. Granger was formidable enough on her own, but Snape would tear him apart (and bury his body in the Forbidden Forest without a second thought). Draco didn’t dare tell anybody, but if he played his cards right, he could have some fun messing with her head. Oh Granger, you are one twisted little witch. He gradually drifted back to sleep, imagining what he was going to say to her the next day.

you mean so head girl hermione and teacher snape are on the same rounds together ?? and he still had to finish organizing the prefect hall-monitor rotation. (And all this blasted grading!)

where Blaise Zabini and hermione granger having full sex? or did snape stop him on time?? are Blaise Zabini and hermione granger together?? or was this blackmail??