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by nikki13088

schedule June 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was curious because I've never given Draco/Ginny any thought before as a couple. I think you have an interesting idea, but I couldn't finish reading because it was a little hard for me to follow. May I suggest smaller paragraphs? It can be hard to read when there is so much going on in one paragraph: dialogue, thoughts, and descriptions. I like to see it broken down a bit more, but if this is your style and you love it then don't change it!
schedule June 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hate draco
schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far and I am looking forward to more. Hope to see Draco-Ginny interaction.