Its actually incredible the way you describe Ginny emotions, just 3 chapters and I am alredy crying. I never thought of them as a cople but the way you develop the relationship you made me love them.
What a ride! I had a blast reading this, and i can't wait till you've finished the sequel. I won't start on it until you're done with it because i'm not really a patient person :D
I really enjoyed your story. I would love further insight about Harry’s powers but with everything else going on I understand not getting too involved in that. It’s not his story after all. I’d recommend a free app like grammarly to check for grammatical errors. I use it all the time. Draco’s character development was very enjoyable. I felt some of Ginny’s ‘does he love me or bot’ teen drama feelings were a bit overused. She’s a strong woman and don’t see her with so much self doubt. I liked this wasn’t just some overly lude erotica like some I’ve stumbled upon here but also didn’t shy away from the fact that people are sexual beings.
I really enjoyed your work. Thanks for the time you put into writing it. I look forward to reading your other in progress fan fic.
Loved it....... The character developement and interaction was amazing and believable, The Ginny "possessed" was nail biting and intense. I love Ginny and Draco as a couple and this is the first I have read with them together. You are a wickedly talented author and I hope you write more. Thank you for an exvellent read :)
I have been reading this all at once. I had planned to leave a long review at the end. But, there was spmething in this chapter that touched me. I am a trauma survivor and have PTSD. Ginny going to Draco after her nightmare is so much like me turning to my fiance when I have nightmares. You are an amazing author. This piece is so mult-ilayered and deep. The characters ring true, but with new depths. I love your Draco and what you have done with him and Ginny. Well done kudos to you. Now on to reading more.