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for A Tent With A View

by OracleObscured

person Fox
schedule June 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dear Oracle, This was such a sweet story, very innocent comparing to your other ones :-) I don't like Ron, but he was really lovely here. Nice to see that from Hermione's point of view, some of her thoughts were so naive and appropriately virginal...I was never appropriately virginal, even as virgin...my imagination was always too wild, but it's refreshing to see, that not everyone is as crazy as me. I enjoyed it very much. But now I need to move onto something dirtier ;-D Thank you Your Fox xx
person Jessie Deal
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. And like you have said, very cannon.
I love how realistic this story is. Hermione and Ron are very believable as inexperienced first time couple. You write wonderfully. thank you for sharing it with us.
person BAFan
schedule May 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I enjoyed it immensely.
person Afer
schedule May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that story! Seemed much more intimate than just smut.
schedule May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
We're having seconds no?! A nice little threesome would be perfect...