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by Lomonaaeren

person ChaosLady
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!
person SP777
schedule August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #14..

We finally get a 'scene' featuring Harry & Draco and it lasts...5 seconds. O_O
I expect more next chapter. :-p But it is progressing nicely.
person Jan
schedule August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story please update chapter 15 soon.
person ChaosLady
schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sexy!
person starr
schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yes well their wanking went well well by what I read, OMG that was hot the kiss , they both are getting very hot and bothered here !!!!! Thanks and see you soon..... loved how Harry got to the Goblins !!!!!!!!
person SP777
schedule August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #13..

I had to laugh...when I read the beginning I was like 'Draco wants to impress Harry', then
I read the title...'yep that's about right'. :-)

I liked this it was sweet, tho' I kinda wish Harry would have complimented Draco on his dress
robes, that would have been ''icing on a cake''.

I have to ask, ever thought of doing a threesome story where Harry is the initiator of the sex, most
times you always have Draco being the one it seems.
person moon
schedule August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! How romantic. Hehe! I like this gentle progression
person starr
schedule August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow this was so good they just kissed and they need time to think or whatever !!!! so good , it finally started !!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon ::):):):):):
person moon
schedule August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh just kiss already!! Lol. I love it.
person starr
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally they see that they like each other !!!!!!! now moving forward !!!!!!!