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for Acts of Life

by Lomonaaeren

person moon
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ho-ho-ho! You know I like this! Fluff you say? In the past you interpreted my easy romance love for love of fluff. So I anticipate this being the kind of thing I like. In reality, I like the struggles of the story to be outside of the relationship and for the lovers to use their bond to ease the pain of life or strengthen each other as they face the conflict. This is a nice change of pace. Some of your last few stories were pretty...tense, full of difficulties, stress...made me as a reader feel anxious. I do like that though. Your work is amazing. I've not read them all but I will be going back. I've instead been re-reading some from years ago. Do you see comments made to conpleted stories? I try to comment though I usually have little to say. I'm happy to take what you give and I don't have questions until the end but you always resolve things to my curiosity's satisfaction. Thank you again for sharing your gift. :)
person ChaosLady
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good start!
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the start. I also like that they don't seem to be out of character. I look forward to next Monday, I don't normally say that!!