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by Lomonaaeren

person isabelle johansson
schedule April 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
person rigger42
schedule February 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awww, lovely ending. I like how Draco ends empowered, with the good will of the crowd, and genuine expressions between him and Harry.
person gollumsfriend
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Bit disappointed in the somewhat abrupt ending, but also agree it was time to wrap things up. Continuing much more would start feeling like too many other stories. Nice read overall, thank you!
person Hestia
schedule January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like this one, it's different than others. Just so you know, if you even read reviews after you finished writing, I read most of your work as long as it's Harry/Draco. I'm impatient so I try to wait to read most things until the work is complete.
person staar
schedule January 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
loved it and HG/RWreally nice to see that they are changing !!!!!!
person SP777
schedule January 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about the end...

Kind of subtly abrupt to me, but you can go so far with this.
At least it was on a good note.
person moodysavage
schedule January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* wonderul. That was just a wonderful and perfect ending. It avoided being heavy and political (like that speaker wanted to be lol)and instead was clever and funny. I absolutely loved Draco's running translation/commentary. And leaving off with a kiss in front of everyone was perfect :)
schedule January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
aaaaw, the end is perfect
person zsfantasy
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Thank you for sharing.
person SP777
schedule January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #33...

What's wrong with doing another wedding scene? It's not like people do them anymore, as a matter of fact
I think the younger authors don't have an idea of how to put a good one together...yet. SO, at least they
haven't been done to death as of recent.

Btw, nice chapter. :-)