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September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Draco has a cousin, and Harry's going to be a godfather ^_^
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September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Geez Louise I just saw 'End' and I almost cried. What a relief! :D. As usual chap was great. Rly wasn't expecting Luc to know Casey, Dray's reaction was perfect! Hehehe! Can't wait for the next update. XD
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MY POOR LITTLE LION, SO HAPPY HE HAD A GOOD THANKSGIVING !!!!! NEVELLE AND LUNA ARE THE SAME AS ALWAYS !!!! DRACO GETTING OUT OF CHARTER THERE WITH HIS NEW COUSIN !!!! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE....YOU ARE GOING TO PUT GINNY UNDER THE RUG CORRECT CAUSE I'M JUST WAITING FOR THAT TO HAPPEN !!!!!!!!
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Casey and Lucius were great!
I hate to say this but Thanksgiving is an American holiday, not celebrated in Britain.
I hate to say this but Thanksgiving is an American holiday, not celebrated in Britain.
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13
Good chapter. I love the idea of Kasper the Friendly Apparating Dog [my idea of a joke] as a familiar for Harry, but I think Casey should have pointed out the different spelling, especially since she mentioned Casper the Ghost later on. I know that if I had only heard the dog's name I would have assumed it was spelled with a "C." But maybe the alternate spelling is more common in the U.K.?
Warning: Slight lecture coming up. Feel free to skip.
" . . . Harry told him a few more ideas in which Severus provided him a second opinion.. . ."
I've been seeing this more and more frequently: the phrase "in which" being used when unnecessary or just plain incorrect. In the above sentence, Severus is giving his opinion on (not in) or about Harry's ideas. So the correct phrasing would be "ideas on which Severus provided him a second opinion" or "ideas about which Severus provided him a second opinion." We can offer opinions in meetings or during conversations, but not in ideas. :-)
Good chapter. I love the idea of Kasper the Friendly Apparating Dog [my idea of a joke] as a familiar for Harry, but I think Casey should have pointed out the different spelling, especially since she mentioned Casper the Ghost later on. I know that if I had only heard the dog's name I would have assumed it was spelled with a "C." But maybe the alternate spelling is more common in the U.K.?
Warning: Slight lecture coming up. Feel free to skip.
" . . . Harry told him a few more ideas in which Severus provided him a second opinion.. . ."
I've been seeing this more and more frequently: the phrase "in which" being used when unnecessary or just plain incorrect. In the above sentence, Severus is giving his opinion on (not in) or about Harry's ideas. So the correct phrasing would be "ideas on which Severus provided him a second opinion" or "ideas about which Severus provided him a second opinion." We can offer opinions in meetings or during conversations, but not in ideas. :-)
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14
Hmm, why is the identity of Oliver's lover a mystery? Is it . . . Lucius? That would be a shock, for sure, lol! Absolutely loved this chapter!
Hmm, why is the identity of Oliver's lover a mystery? Is it . . . Lucius? That would be a shock, for sure, lol! Absolutely loved this chapter!
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September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 16
Percy, eh? A bit of a surprise, that. Molly and Arthur's reactions to the news was great; makes up for Ginny's, though she knows how to put up a good front. Oh well, sooner or later her family will see through her false mask.
Percy, eh? A bit of a surprise, that. Molly and Arthur's reactions to the news was great; makes up for Ginny's, though she knows how to put up a good front. Oh well, sooner or later her family will see through her false mask.
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September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally, well that was slightly interesting. I am a little surprised that the Weasly'e besides the twins haven't contacted Harry either to say they are staying out of it or persuade him to drop it or something. I am going to guess that Hermoine and/or her Daughter will have to be preseant at court to give testimony. I can see Harry objecting to his Goddaughter to protect her. What of the other Weaslys will they come and same with Sev and Draco
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September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanksgiving dinner was a nice sentiment, but Brits don't celebrate Thanksgiving. That's an American holiday.
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September 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, so hate that homophobic little girl, so hope she gets her dues. So liked the part where Dray found out he had a cousin. So happy that Harry is gona be a godfather to Luna and Nev's kid. Thought i was not really surprised that Percy and Ollie paired up (read a story with them paired up before)